A little bit of black
A little bit of red
she’s wearing all black, a corset
With purple threading,
Blood red lips and a bit of brown eyeliner to accentuate her green eyes—-
She peers from the large brim of her hat,
He sees her too,
And he’s got that look
That says, “I’m a bit Victorian
But I love your black duds”
He gives her a black rose—
She gives him a violet one,
And gives him a look
That says, “I am
Not that locked up, even
With all my
Chains on my clothes and neck”
And they both seem
To drink in
The feeling of
Being seen.
Really, truly
Seen.
She offers him tea,
He offers her a blood orange,
And they share a haven
And watch a bit of Vincent Price,
Read a lot of
Coraline,
And also, The Ocean At The End of the Lane—
And it turns out
They both have a lot to say
On the topic of paternal alienation
Through their own
Pain—-cut like a knife,
They ease the weight that they carry, invisible—- like toppling rocks that have been
Carried on their shoulders, ready to fall
Yet they haven’t
Due to being
Tied (but every single person, by themselves, by no one/everyone)
Onto their egos
Grappling them loosely yet tight enough to cause
Disintegration of
Their sense of emotional
Integrity.
So, little bit by little bit
They take off one piece of a stone
Off each other,
And soon,
The light shines through—-
Her still in black,
He still in Victorian duds.
She’s always been hacked :
Her poetry slammed off the earth (her sisters scowl and mothers indifference)
And he’s always been stripped :
His stories tossed into Hade’s Underworld (his fathers trash)
And somehow, their different words
Found a place to meet,
Mixing into a symphony
Of brilliant songs and
Places and people and dreams
And horrors
Churning out the most resonant
And integral part to their history
To a bit of consolation.
So they both
Say—Sweetheart,
Let’s go for a stroll,
Have a bit of red added to
Our black garbed droll,
And so
In their first dream
Date
They sold
All their fancy and pretty Merlot,
But he saved a tiny bit of
Old red (a very well preserved bit of gold),
To taste like a bitter toast—
They drank it
From each other’s soul,
A kiss that lasted
Until eternity,
And how it tasted sweet,
Oh so sweet—
To finally have someone with that missing puzzle piece
They needed,
For now they were together,
They felt complete.
A little bit
Of black threaded
With their rose,
A red swirling
Liquid
To encircle
Their trust and cooling
Identity,
It was entirely
A perfect mix
Of goth & Victorian
Black and Red
A little bit of
Entropy
And fate,
To find out that someone could love you
For you,
To be your true friend and best soul mate.
About the Creator
Melissa Ingoldsby
I am a published author on Patheos.
I am Bexley is published by Resurgence Novels here.
The Half Paper Moon is available on Golden Storyline Books for Kindle.
My novella Carnivorous is to be published by Eukalypto soon! Coming soon
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Comments (6)
This is wonderful and so fast-paced Melissa… almost slam style poetry maybe.. even though I’m not massively familiar with that style. Loved the storytelling too. I liked ALL the parts haha, but I particularly enjoyed when they read Coraline together..😁 I’ve not read it but enjoyed the film.
This reads like a beautiful waltz! And that line... "Mixing into a symphony Of brilliant songs ". Be still my heart! This was awesome!
Great piece! This was really good!
This a great dark poetry. Sorry, it was hard to get into my Vocal . I don’t sign in thru Facebook. I finally got in . Thanks for entering
Wow! I love this! This is great!
Great Piece📝😉✌️I love those Titles ♥️🌚