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A Hope's Goodbye

clasping at shadows

By Rachael MacDonaldPublished 3 days ago 1 min read
A Hope's Goodbye
Photo by Elena Istomina on Unsplash

That thing that I seek,

It lies in the deep, entrenched in the darkest of space.

Sharp claws digging down,

In stillness of sound, capitulating to one not so weak.

Blood within stone,

Wriggling moan, I'm beset by tragic so true,

The thing that I crave,

While I ranted and raved, that thing- away it did flew.

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Rachael MacDonald

Avid Reader, Sometimes Poet, Occasional Writer, and searcher of truths often lost in the breaths between candy-coated lies.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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Comments (4)

  • Esala Gunathilakeabout 14 hours ago

    A nice poem by you Rachael.

  • Kenny Penn2 days ago

    Missed seeing your work, Rachael. This poem is really good

  • Joe Patterson3 days ago

    Nice work.

  • The imagery of something sought in the deep and darkest spaces creates a mysterious and haunting atmosphere, the final line leaves the reader with a sense of loss and yearning, thank you very much for sharing, love your works, hope to read more, subscribed.

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