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A Good Night

A Perspective on Love, Life, and Self-Worth

By Amanda StarksPublished 6 years ago 1 min read
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Do not go gently into that good night, He said.

What good night? I replied.

What night is ever good?

You lay there in solitary darkness,

Waiting for a sunrise,

To brighten,

Your isolation.

But what about a night spent in the arms of another? He countered.

What arms? I replied.

Those arms,

If they were to wrap around me,

Would be wrapped around the soul of a murderer,

And murderers do not take kindly to comfort,

From the arms of intruders.

What is wrong with comfort? He inquired.

Comfort is brief, I replied.

It never lasts,

Like a warm spring,

Never,

Outgrows,

A bitter winter.

But what about love? He pressed.

Is love not eternal?

No, I insisted.

Love is for the fickle joys of men's hearts,

And for the yearning young dreams of girls minds.

Love is,

What I would call,

A good night.

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About the Creator

Amanda Starks

Lover of the dark, fantastical, and heart-wrenching. Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!

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  • Sandra Tena Cole12 days ago

    💜💜💜

  • Mackenzie Davis6 months ago

    Ooh wow, Amanda, this is very poignant, yet I feel the strength of the speaker's character here, so it almost makes up for the sadness of her position, knowing that there might be a potential avenue for her to see another's perspective on love. The way you wrote this is fantastic; referencing that old poem at first, bringing the conversation back to it at the end; what a punch. Just, awesome. Begs for multiple readings.

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