A careful glance around me
What’s left?
I look at a broken world
Is there anything left for me for the future?
Only if I insist too much
On a risky, rugged path
Near my goals
Made of tears, obligations imposed on me
Which I intend to fulfil
To the last drop
Of blood
On my skin not used to this
Process
But I carry on anyway
Leading the way
To discoveries every day
Of human condition
With lots of discrepancies along the way
Not fully fledged and comprehending
The circumstances surrounding them
While the whole old world has gone insane
Questioning the only knowledge possessed
Now abandoned and self-critical
So that the jeopardy
Goes off the rails
Leaving too much hesitation behind
Barred and wired doors
Useless to anyone
Only allowing to be forgotten
When the last sign of justice beamed
Beckoning beacons on the Urgent Blood vehicles
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10 November 2021
revised on 5 September 2022
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