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A Broken Telephone

A Poem on Communication

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 2 years ago 1 min read
A Broken Telephone
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One of my favourite childhood games was one my classmates fondly termed 'Broken Telephone.' The game entailed passing a message to people in a line until the last person received it. The last person usually received a distorted version of the message. 

Broken Telephone may have been a childhood game, but it stresses clear communication. Distorted messages have the effect of causing misunderstandings, damaging relationships and sometimes, missed opportunities. 

Winning the game of Broken Telephone requires active listening. Speak using simple language and provide enough context for listeners to intepret situations appropriately. It may be helpful to ask what a person understands from the message given. 

Telephone lines don't have to be broken. Enjoy these senryus. 

Broken telephone 

It cannot send out signals

One must speak clearly

Broken telephone

Simple messages sent through

Heard clearly by ear

Broken telephone 

Must speak enough of one's mind

For understanding

Broken telephone

Must repeat the message heard

For knowledge of all

inspirationalSenryu

About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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    Written by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin