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The ruby is there.
I am grateful,
It fell to the ground,
A crack formed,
I am saddened,
I loved my necklace.
About the Creator
Rebecca Patton
Ever since I discovered Roald Dahl, I wanted to be an author who would delight and move her readers through her stories and characters. I have also written my debut novel, "Of Demons and Deception."
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (3)
Oh, this is so clever! As Joe said below, short and sweet. Incredibly effective.💗
Short and sweet, but it makes you think!
Sadly beautiful, great challenge entry. I keep starting these but am then unable to finish