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A Broken Necklace

An Inverse Poem

By Rebecca PattonPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
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A Broken Necklace
Photo by Victoria Priessnitz on Unsplash

The ruby is there.

I am grateful,

It fell to the ground,

A crack formed,

I am saddened,

I loved my necklace.

sad poetryGratitudeFree VerseFor Funart
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About the Creator

Rebecca Patton

Ever since I discovered Roald Dahl, I wanted to be an author who would delight and move her readers through her stories and characters. I have also written my debut novel, "Of Demons and Deception."

IG: https://www.instagram.com/rspatton10/

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  • sleepy drafts3 months ago

    Oh, this is so clever! As Joe said below, short and sweet. Incredibly effective.💗

  • Joe O’Connor3 months ago

    Short and sweet, but it makes you think!

  • Sadly beautiful, great challenge entry. I keep starting these but am then unable to finish

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