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A Bowl of Cereal


By HandsomelouiiThePoet (Lonzo ward)Published 6 months ago 1 min read
A Bowl of Cereal
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“Let's get cereal

I'll Grab a Big Bowl, oh no…

Damn, The milk is old…” 🥛

Authors Note: I always purchase milk from the grocery store and Declare that I will drink more milk 🐮 but when I get ready for a nice cold Splash, I find out it doesn't endure for too long…

I pondered about how long it lasts vs Me not really having a desire in milk… hhhmm Maybe it's me🤔💭


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  • Alex H Mittelman 6 months ago

    I wish milk lasted longer! Great work!

  • Use a little every day to prevent it from going sour.

  • 💚💙🧡❤️

  • Tiffany Gordon 6 months ago

  • Lol, I think it's you! 🤣🤣🤣 Loved your Senryu!

  • Babs Iverson6 months ago

    Super humorous!!! Loved it!!!❤️❤️💕

  • Cathy holmes6 months ago

    Yeah, maybe it's you. Lol

  • Shirley Belk6 months ago

    story of my life...lol in more ways than one

  • Mother Combs6 months ago

    Ew, yuck, spoiled milk. Great senryu, Handsome

  • Kristen Balyeat6 months ago

    haha! Expired milk is the worst, especially when you've already poured the cereal. Dry cereal just doesn't hit the same. Great piece, Lonzo!

  • Lamar Wiggins6 months ago

    Mmm...Cinnamon toast Crunch!!! I would have probably used the next best thing, coffee creamer😅🤢, lol. Nice entry, Lonzo!

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