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A Bird at Heart

A Haiku

By Real PoeticPublished 6 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
Top Story - August 2023
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A Bird at Heart
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Am I a true bird,

if I never fly again

or an imposter?

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You could lose your beak

or evolve to teleport.

Still would be a bird.

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About the Creator

Real Poetic

Welcome to my imagination. โœจ

I write poetry & short stories.

Thanks for stopping by! โค๏ธ

Website: real-poetic.com

Instagram: @therealpoetic

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  • The Invisible Writer4 months ago

    Fantastic

  • Jack Thompson6 months ago

    Beautiful parrots

  • Jack Thompson6 months ago

    Beautiful parrots

  • Mariann Carroll6 months ago

    Very profound poetry ๐Ÿฅฐ

  • Grz Colm6 months ago

    Very philosophical! Great work Real Poetic!! โ˜บ๏ธ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘ & congrats on your top story.

  • Babs Iverson6 months ago

    Brilliant haiku!!!

  • Poppy 6 months ago

    Lovely haiku!

  • Missclicked6 months ago

    wonderful! congratulations on top story!

  • Rob Angeli6 months ago

    Wonderful pair of haiku! And a profound line of questioning sparked here. Congrats on your beautiful Top Story!

  • Gen-Z Writes.6 months ago

    Congratulations on your top story โ™ฅ๏ธ

  • Ashley Lima6 months ago

    This is breathtaking!

  • Joelle E๐ŸŒ™6 months ago

    Nice message โค๏ธ congrats on TS!

  • Congratulations!!!! โค๏ธโœจ๐Ÿ™๐ŸŽ‰

  • Jazzy 6 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story! ๐Ÿ’•

  • Alex H Mittelman 6 months ago

    Great work and congratulations!

  • S. C. Almanzar6 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story, very interesting work! A bird is a bird no matter a few modifications.

  • Congratulations on This Sweet Top Story๐ŸŽ‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ‘Œ๐Ÿ’ฏ

  • Celia in Underland6 months ago

    So cool-I really loved the message in this.And beautifully written as always! Congrats on TS! ๐Ÿค

  • Rachel Deeming6 months ago

    Yes, you would. Teleporting bird made me laugh but there is a deeper message too, I think, which I rather like. Congrats on TS!

  • Paul Stewart6 months ago

    Beautiful! Well done on Top Story!

  • ThatWriterWoman6 months ago

    Gorgeous! Always yourself - no matter what!

  • Kristen Balyeat6 months ago

    Ohhhh, really love this! Great message! ๐Ÿ’ž๐Ÿ’ซ

  • Donna Fox (HKB)6 months ago

    I love this and the message it stands for! Be who/ what you want to be, only you can define if it's true or not! Live to dream and be grateful for your gifts!

  • Oh wow! This was so deep! So many things do not define who we are.

  • Tiffany Gordon 6 months ago

    Brilliant RP! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿพ

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