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9mm

By Donald Quixote

By Donald QuixotePublished 3 years ago 1 min read
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Staring down the barrel of a 9mm

Target in the distance,

Magazine full of metal.

Finger lightly feathers the trigger

And arm aches from the weight,

Mind anticipates the release of power,

Shoulders tense.

Jaw tightens.

Before you know it BANG

Smoke rises. Wicked recoil.

Eyes peer thru the vanishing cloud.

The stench of something burning

Hits the nostrils and throat.

Burning. Acrid. Bitter.

Noxious and sour.

Ears still ringing.

Arms still tingling.

Raw power. Visceral.

Damage at a thousand miles per hour.

Cock it.

Reload.

BANG

surreal poetry
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About the Creator

Donald Quixote

Hopeless romantic,

adventurer in paradox;

so it goes

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