36°
For Jazzy Goncalves Filthy Haiku Challenge
Thirty six degrees
Deliciously wicked eyes
Intensely lock mine
.
Six minutes of tease
Clothes become suffocating
Barriers to flesh
.
Six clothing items
Between us, ripped from our skin
Discarded on floor
.
Six hours of naked
Savouring, licking, tasting
Bodies crave encore
.
Degrees of wild play
Bathed in sweat and stickiness
Saturated sheets
Written for Jazzy Goncalves Filthy Haiku Challenge which I’m sure you have all seen! If not - head there next and get your creative, umm, juices flowing.
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uhm..yeah...ok...that was...steaming. Steaming hot! Well done!
Wow you took the challenge and ran with it, Kayleigh! Loved it, very well done and, well, filthy? Haha great job!
Well done!!❤️
Oh I love that feeling when the clothes become suffocating! This was so great thank you so much for blessing us with your filthy haiku!!!!!!!!
Oooo, I was wondering is there a significance to the number six as it was repeated a few times. Lol, creative juices 🤣🤣🤣
Vivid.
Whoa!!! Sounds like one hell of a night! 😁
Great poem!