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11/14/21

It's been too long

By Daniel KPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Runner-Up in Time Capsule Haiku Challenge
11/14/21
Photo by Fred Russo on Unsplash

Days feel like seasons

the acorn of missing you

made an oak of me

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Comments (9)

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Congratulations!

  • Denelsia Walkerabout a year ago

    Congratulations 🎉

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    Nicely done, congrats

  • Lena Folkertabout a year ago

    This is stunning. I think this is more than runner up material. First place so far to me!

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    Oh, this was heartbreaking. That last line twist is exactly how a haiku is done. Congratulations on placing in this challenge. ❤'d and subscribed 😄🤗

  • Rachel M.Jabout a year ago

    So clever! I adore this

  • Ayva Mabout a year ago

    Really beautiful 🌻

  • Deidra Darstabout a year ago

    Very profound

  • Donna Reneeabout a year ago

    Wow, what a powerful expression of loss! Great work!

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