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Doubtful Date Doings

A Simple Story of a Romantic Night...Almost Gone Wrong

By Jose Wright Jr.Published 3 years ago 7 min read
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Doubtful Date Doings
Photo by Raul De Los Santos on Unsplash

If the night could get any colder, Jersey would have been renamed "Alaska Vol. 2!!" It was frigid, stifling, and at times, the wind blew with enough force to shake the windows. A night out in December isn't a joke, but what man would miss a chance like this?

Julius waited for months to have a date with Sharon, and no amount of cold air was gonna keep him from seeing her. Even though his fingertips felt absent, and his nose might have been stuffed more than a juicy, Thanksgiving turkey, he was determined to see the face of his biggest crush, EVER!! He'd have to be completely inebriated to miss this chance, and for him, there isn't enough weed or alcohol in the world for it!

- If my heart pulsates any harder, I'm gonna have to pull out my inhaler, he thinks to himself.

Music by Ledisi plays softly in his 2018, royal blue, Toyota Camry. He's smiling hard, with his favorite blue suit on. Head to toe, the man could've done a photoshoot for GQ magazine, and stolen the outfit of the year to some minds. Cuff links are in place, matching the white and blue tie. Blue alligator shoes dawned to step into the venue with flare; if he wasn't considered noticeable by women before, oh he will take a gamble at it today.

Julius' phone rings, and he picks up.

"My guy, what's good? You got that thang prepared?"

"Yup! Everything's in place, and waiting for your que to move in."

"Alright! I'll text you as soon as it's time."

*click*

The ride to Sharon's house seemed eternally long, and the anticipation was building up. When they first met, J wasn't sure he could even stand a chance. They attended church for so long, but Sharon was in a relationship with a jerk, who was more concerned about her skirt than her relationship with God. The Bible wasn't what he truly dreamed about opening. Ya know what I'm sayin?

Julius hoped and prayed for Sharon to see past her then boyfriend's, "devotion to church," so he could be with her without question! He figured he was definitely ready to love her, but as far as confidence to speak to her goes...he felt like he stood no chance in talking without stuttering. He didn't think it was possible, but after much prayer (and tips from some of her friends, who saw them as a potentially great couple), he asked her out on a date.

Back to the present moment, Julius slowly pulls up to the front of Sharon's apartment. She's living quite nicely, if one may add. The brownstone had a vintage exterior with a modern interior, and it looked like a space where magazines would photograph for its architecture. Julius picks up the phone, takes a deep breath, and begins dialing. After a few rings, Sharon picks up.

"Hello...Julius?"

"Beautiful evening Sharon! I hope your day was wonderful, and you're feeling great. Are you ready? I'm outside."

"Oh ok! I'll be down in 1 minute. I've just got to get my coat, but I'm coming down."

"Okay! See you in a moment."

"See you."

*click*

Julius shouldn't be getting nervous, but as he begins thinking to himself about the date, his hands perspire just a little. It's time for his dream date! As soon as he hangs up, he bolts out of his door, and walks to the passenger side. He takes a deep breath, and opens the door just as Sharon steps out of her apartment building. The moment his eyes made contact with her figure, his heart melted, and his jaw became loose. I don't think you would've been able to pick it up with a crane!

"Sh...Sharon! You look absolutely breathtaking! My goodness...please, have a seat!"

"Well well! He opens doors, dresses and smells fantastic, and has a smile that melts hearts. Such a gentleman! Thank you."

"Oh it is my pleasure."

As Julius closes the car door and returns to his seat, he thinks of the comments he just heard. This is absolutely incredible! Even though his palms need a towel from the sweat accumulated, she just made him feel like pure gold. What's even better is, as their ride to the venue ensued, Sharon has not stopped smiling since she sat down. This is one promising starting point, isn't it? Homeboy's heart is on cloud 9,029!! Cloud 9 is just too low of a number!

They reach the sophisticated diner Julius reserved, and as nature beckoned him too, he ensured she was escorted in a chivalrous manner. He pushes Sharon's chair in gently, and prepares for the night. They laugh, order their food, and look as though they've been seeing each other for months. Julius had no clue, but Sharon's mind was in a trance simply because of his smell alone.

- What cologne is this man wearing? I need to take a deep breath and restrain my thoughts. Goodness!

Julius makes a statement before they continue on. "Oh wait a second! Let me silence my phone."

(Julius texts) # Aight bruh, GREEN LIGHT! Come in now!

The conversation is as beautiful as can be; the appetizers have arrived, and the meal is on point! As they continue digging in, Julius' phone vibrates...and Sharon's left eyebrow raises. Julius takes a look.

(return text) # Problem...I don't see your diner dude. 82 Manning Way, right?

(Julius texts) # No crab face!! I said 84 CANCER DRIVE!!! You're like 5 blocks away bruh!! WTH???

Shame...the date was going so smoothly...

Sharon's expression went from joy to irritated in no time flat. Like quite a number of women, phone usage during a date is rude. Julius broke code! He is slowly flushing her interest in him down the toilet, and she's trying not to pull the lever.

"So...is that your other date, Julius?"

"Other date? Oh no...NO NO NO!!! You're the only woman I am dating! I can promise you that."

"Ok...if you say so."

"Someone I know is in the city, and they're lost. He needs to find his way to my spot."

(Return text) # I am trippin! In route my guy!

Sharon takes a deep breath, as Julius' phone vibrates. She gets up, looks at Julius with hopeful eyes, and slowly walks towards the bathroom.

"Hey Julius...you've been wonderful up until you answered your phone. Keep that in mind, ok?"

Sharon's walk to the bathroom was so empowering to look at, but at that moment, gave Julius great concern. Dude is in a tight spot with Sharon...just that fast. How did this date get spiked with sour liquor that quickly? Julius' homeboy! The moment he decided to take a deep breath, and was about to pray to God for peace, that "special" individual walked through the door!

"Sir...I'm gonna slap you when I see you next."

"Bro my fault."

"Manning and Cancer do not sound the same. How did you get the address confused?"

"I had a LONG DAY, AIGHT?"

"Yo, I gave you strict instructions, and needed you to follow and be on time! I can't imagine the day yo had, but you gave me your word..ugh! Glad you made it."

Sharon's ears hear vague dialogue, but recognizes Julius' voice! Curious on who this mysterious individual is, she touches up her makeup, and gets ready to step back out.

-I know for a fact, that this man did not bring someone else to...

She pushes the bathroom door open, and begins swiftly walking back to the table, when her jaw starts loosening slowly. Julius sees her face, smiles, and as she gets closer to the table, he explains himself.

"Sharon...this is who I was texting. I wanted to bring this vase full of multicolored flowers for you, and the bear to represent me. I'd like the idea of you cuddling me at night. I wanted you to feel special, so I..."

*SMOOCH*

Her spine couldn't sit still. Sharon basically lunged herself at Julius, and gave him the softest kiss.

"Thank you...it's beautiful! Hold on a second. He is the one you were texting?"

Julius slowly gathers power, and punches his friend in the arm.

"Yup...this guy!"

THE END

[This story is fictional, from my mind, and created for your entertainment on account of romance and dating. If it resembles anything or anyone, know that it's purely coincidental. Cheers]

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About the Creator

Jose Wright Jr.

I am a published poet & writer, author of the book "Love's Urban Fragment" on Amazon, CEO of Dr. Ink Wright L.L.C., and a man who loves to use writing to entertain and uplift! May you find pieces of me here that uplift & inspire!!

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