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The Last Notification

24 Hours Until Judgement

By Kenneth cruzPublished 2 days ago • 9 min read

Nobody remembers exactly how things unfolded the day the phones stopped.

There were screams, cries, and an eerie, awkward silence. Some say there was a woman in Tokyo, standing beneath a train station clock, who stood frozen, screaming and crying under its shadow for hours. Others insist it was a little boy in London who began crying and shouting, “No! How could this happen?” before the rest of the world even understood what was going on.

There are those who claim nobody screamed at all. Couples simply stared at each other, lost in horrific revelation and disbelief. They say parts of the world went silent.

But there’s one thing we can all agree on. We all remember the sound.

Eight billion little chimes, ringing across the Earth, echoing in a single, impossible instant.

We were exercising, driving. Sleeping. Making love. Grunting, shouting, and making promises we never intended to keep. We were stealing, praying, laughing, lying, getting high, and living. Hell, some of us were dying. Some of us were being born.

And then we looked down at the eerie message, and life was never the same.

FINAL JUDGMENT HAS BEGUN.

TWENTY-FOUR HOURS REMAIN.

For three seconds, humanity was united, locked in on one thought.

What the fuck?

Then that was it. The screens went black.

We pressed buttons. We cursed manufacturers and carriers alike. We held down power switches, shook our phones, plugged them into chargers. A billion people tried turning them off and on again, resetting them in every fashion imaginable. Wives blamed husbands, and husbands blamed wives. Nobody noticed the irony.

In churches, pastors fell to their knees in prayer. In government buildings, officials demanded explanations. When the dust settled and the realization hit that this might actually be real, husbands and wives began asking each other what their messages had said.

Some of us lied.

Because not everyone had received the same message.

Some had been promised salvation.

ASCENSION WILL TAKE PLACE TOMORROW.

Others had been condemned.

LEFT BEHIND. JUDGMENT AWAITS.

And the rest? The rest had been told to wait.

DECISION PENDING.

We didn’t know who had sent the messages. We didn’t know whether there was a God waiting above us, a man sitting behind a computer screen laughing at what he’d done, or some greater alien race planning to swoop down and take those it chose.

But we knew one thing. For the first time in human history, we had been told exactly how much time we had left.

For the first time, communication as the modern world knew it was no more. There was no internet, no television broadcasts, and for once, the world grew eerily silent as we were left to think and listen to that voice inside our heads. For the most part, we were going to make every second count.

Unfortunately, we had very different ideas about what that meant.

At first, we thought it might be simple. The saved would come together, the condemned would beg for forgiveness or wreak havoc, and the others would wait or try to seek redemption alongside those condemned who hoped for a different outcome. But of course, things weren’t that simple.

Chaos came quickly. Within hours, when the realization hit that there were no emergency calls, no emails, and no radio communication whatsoever, people took to the streets. We could have expected the looting, the rioting, the crescendo of ruckus and flames entangled in their own sadistic orchestra.

It was the opera of screams and horrific cries that we couldn’t escape.

What we hadn’t expected was the number of supposedly saved individuals who embraced the dark, cruel reality unfolding around them. Some appointed themselves judges, killing those they believed were condemned. Others raped and pillaged like Vikings, convinced they were already free from consequence. In fact, some of the saved acted just as darkly, or darker, than those who had been condemned.

Others, like Ronald in Texas, started movements for the condemned. Ronald formed a protective militia whose goal was to protect others and perhaps earn redemption for those condemned or still awaiting judgment.

There was Brett, a wealthy businessman in New York, who promised an extravagant ascension party for the saved. But reality would reveal he had an ulterior motive. Somewhere in Florida, a little boy simply slept, telling himself everything would be all right if he could just sleep through it.

Pastor Jacobs in Los Angeles declared it the beginning of the Rapture. He preached that a modern-day crusade was necessary to protect those chosen for ascension. He was able to convince many in his congregation.

By nightfall, they had murdered a slew of people.

One was a fifteen-year-old girl whose only crime was refusing to tell them what her message said. Rumors of her promiscuous behavior had already spread through the congregation, and that was enough for them. Others they murdered were more morally gray, some perhaps outright evil. It was hard to gauge anymore.

Within hours, word of his crusade and newfound religion had somehow spread through this quiet, broken land. Similar factions began popping up everywhere. Still, most of us called them monsters.

They called themselves angels. God’s elected heroes.

And somewhere, perhaps, someone was watching.

In New York, Brett’s ascension party became the event of the century, or at least what remained of it. Champagne flowed, expensive suits were discarded, and strangers embraced as though they’d known one another for lifetimes.

Brett had received the message of the condemned.

He never told his guests.

He’d spent forty years believing money could buy anything. Why should salvation be any different? Surely, whatever ascension awaited his partygoers, he’d find a way to take advantage of it too.

Just in case, he drugged a few of the guests he was closest to. If the Sandman took them before the higher power did, maybe he could slide in and take their place. His invitations promised paradise. His locked doors and control over the event and its guests suggested otherwise.

If they were going to ascend, he would make damn sure he found a way to go with them.

In Texas, Ronald’s militia grew from six frightened men into hundreds of volunteers. Their faces were a random assortment of humanity. Husbands, bikers, firemen, the elderly, even women who had never imagined themselves holding a weapon. Anyone willing to fight for someone else.

Why they fought was another matter. Some fought for redemption. Others fought because they felt it was the right thing to do. Still others fought out of fear, wanting nothing more than to belong somewhere.

They protected the elderly, escorted families through burning neighborhoods, and rescued people from the very mobs that claimed to be doing God’s work.

Ronald had been condemned.

He carried the message in his memory, and it still stung like an open wound. When someone asked why he bothered helping people when his own fate was supposedly sealed, he shrugged.

“Because somebody has to. And hey, you never know. Maybe they’re still watching.”

We didn’t know what to make of that. Perhaps neither did whoever was judging us. Or maybe that was the whole purpose of this little experiment.

In Florida, a little boy named Daniel slept. He’d received no message at all.

His mother had screamed after reading hers and watching her phone go black. He heard her yelling at his father.

“It’s your fault! Your infidelity has cursed this fucking family!”

His father went outside, promising to find answers. He never returned.

Daniel crawled beneath his blankets and decided that if he slept long enough, everything would go back to normal by the time he woke. We envied him. We wished we could sleep through all of this. Hell, we envied anyone who could close their eyes and sleep at all.

TWELVE HOURS REMAINED.

By midnight, the fires were visible from space and heaven itself. At least, that’s what we imagined. Some higher power looking down at us, either relishing our self-made chaos or saddened by the world’s dark turn in judgment. Others imagined a hacker group or government agency in control of this massive psychological operation, sitting somewhere taking notes.

There were no satellites broadcasting images, no reporters delivering updates, no reassuring voices telling us the authorities had everything under control. The world had become eight billion separate nightmares.

Some of us prayed. Some of us killed. Some of us made love for the last time.

And some of us did all three.

The strangest thing wasn’t the violence. That was to be expected. It was how quickly we accepted it.

A man who had never stolen anything in his life smashed a pharmacy window because his daughter needed insulin. Should he be judged?

A woman who had spent her life preaching forgiveness watched her neighbors burn alive and whispered that they deserved it.

A condemned prisoner broke out of jail, only to spend his remaining hours pulling strangers from wrecked cars. Should he be given a different judgment?

A supposedly chosen police officer executed three unarmed teenagers.

A woman gave herself to a group of men and young men, allowing them to fulfill desires they feared they would never experience. In her mind, she believed she was doing something good, giving them a gift they might otherwise never have the chance to receive. What should her judgment be?

We had spent centuries arguing about good and evil. It took one notification to discover how little we understood either.

SIX HOURS REMAINED.

We stopped counting the dead. Not because there were too many, although there were. We stopped because numbers had lost their meaning in this new world.

What was a thousand deaths when the entire world might end before breakfast? What was murder when judgment had supposedly already been rendered? What was forgiveness when nobody knew whether it mattered?

Ronald died sometime before dawn. He was helping a family escape a burning apartment building when a group of self-proclaimed chosen opened fire. His final words were reportedly, “Get the children out. Christ, save me.”

We don’t know if that’s true. We like to believe it is.

Pastor Jacobs survived. So did Brett.

Ronald didn’t.

Daniel was still sleeping.

We like to account for things, fill in the gaps, and tell ourselves that everyone gets the ending they deserve. But we couldn’t help wondering what any of it meant.

ONE HOUR REMAINED.

And then something remarkable happened. The violence began to slow to a crawl. Not everywhere. Not all at once. But in scattered neighborhoods, people emerged from their homes.

Strangers sat together on sidewalks. They held each other and looked up at the sky, waiting in anticipation. Enemies shared cigarettes. A woman offered water to the man who had looted her store.

Some of us apologized. Some forgave. Some refused. Some chose solitude.

We watched the sun climb over a wounded world and wondered whether it would be the last sunrise we ever saw.

For the first time since the notifications, we weren’t asking who deserved salvation. We were asking whether any of us did. And what exactly it all meant.

TEN MINUTES REMAINED.

The churches filled again. So did the streets. Some people climbed onto rooftops, desperate to be closer to heaven. Others hid underground, hoping to escape whatever was coming. Some dropped to their knees in the middle of the street and broke out in prayer.

Brett sat alone in his penthouse, surrounded by empty champagne bottles, strangers, and the unconscious bodies of people who had trusted him. He swore he’d find a way.

Pastor Jacobs stood before the remains of his congregation, blood on his hands, promising that God would reward their faith.

Daniel woke up. He was hungry. He went downstairs and found his mother sitting at the kitchen table, staring at her dead phone, crying.

“Is it over?” he asked.

She looked at him. And for the first time in twenty-four hours, she smiled.

“Almost, baby.”

ONE MINUTE REMAINED.

We counted together. Not through phones or televisions. Through windows. Across streets. In churches and prisons, hospitals and homes.

We held hands and shouted the numbers into the morning air.

Ten.

Nine.

Eight.

Some of us just watched and counted to ourselves.

Seven.

Six.

Some closed their eyes.

Five.

Four.

Some begged for forgiveness.

Three.

Two.

One.

And then—

We wish we could tell you what happened next.

We wish we could tell you whether the heavens opened and trumpets played in a crescendo for all the world to hear. We wish we could tell you whether we vanished in brilliant light, our clothes falling to the ground with a soft thud.

Whether the dead rose. Whether monsters and demons emerged from cracks in the ground. Whether dragons descended from the heavens in a fiery roar.

Whether God had finally spoken. And what He said.

Whether the entire thing had been the greatest act of terrorism in human history, or the largest psychological operation ever carried out.

Whether we had destroyed ourselves over nothing.

But that was the thing.

For twenty-four hours, in a world devoid of phones and communication, we thought the world was ending.

And so we ended it ourselves.

Perhaps that was the judgment all along. Perhaps there was never anyone watching.

We wish we could tell you.

But that’s the trouble with the end of the world.

There has to be someone left to tell the story.

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    Written by Kenneth cruz