Tunnels
When I was little, I thought I could hear fairies.
Sometimes I'd hear voices.
Not in my head, or telling me to do anything. Not even talking to me. It sounded like snatches of conversation I could almost (but not quite) understand. Ordinary. Like someone asking have we any laundry soap left? or close that door, there's a draught.
It happened as far back as I could remember. When I was small, I thought it was evidence of fairies. I'd squat down near the skirting and listen for them. I tried leaving little bits of food, but it only attracted ants.
Years soured the magic and convinced me I was crazy. Pills, hospitals, therapists... Do you know what finally cured me? I moved away. The voices stopped! I even forgot about them for years... How odd. It had been a central part of my life (of me) for so long.
When Dad died, Mum needed help at home. Unmarried, childless, with a job (writing) that didn't glue me to any one place: I was the best sibling for the job.
Gone was the brisk woman who had marshalled me through my childhood. Who was this vague wisp with a faraway look in her eyes, always so distracted and scattered? As if she were listening for something on the edge of hearing. Her hair all white now, slippered feet shuffling.
She put a saucer of milk by the skirting, though she had no cat, and I knew. I should never have come, except to take her away. Somewhere safe.
When I tried to make her leave, all her wispiness sharpened into shrewd edges and hard refusal.
We went to bed frustrated with each other, each annoyed at the other for the failure to listen. She didn't appear for breakfast. I tapped on her bedroom door. No answer. Her bed neatly made. All her belongings in their proper places. She'd taken no coat, no cash, no key.
Had she left? Or been taken?
Police were dismissive, looking sceptical when I insisted she was vulnerable.
I was ready to hiss questions into the wall, to threaten, to beg. To admit, at last, that I'd never been mad, and nor was she.
Then they came for me as well.
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Word count (excluding note): 365
Submitted on 22md January at 18:50
*Quick Author's Note*
Thank you so much for reading! Your thoughtful engagement is very much valued. Please leave a comment so I can reciprocate the read. If you enjoyed it, the best compliment you can give is to share it, or read another.
Pay no attention to the writer behind the curtain: I wanted to do a sort of dark "Borrowers" angle with this one. I'm writing a story every day this year. This one makes a 22 day streak. You can find all of them in my Index post, which is pinned to the top of my profile. I'll also link to it at the bottom. If you've been following the Moira stories, she's still on a break for now. Maybe she will be back tomorrow.
My "story every day" project: if you're joining me on this "story every day" madne adventure, please leave a link in the comments. Whether you're on a creative bent, like me, and writing mostly microfiction/stories, or whether you have your own, self-imposed criteria, I'd love to see what you come up with for today. I'll try to come back and edit this to link to your piece.
Comments (13)
And now the questions will be answered...maybe! At least they weren't crazy after all. Nice micro!
Wall people please take me too, I'm ready! Hehehehe loved your story!
Never threaten to remove someone from the voices. Best simply to take them away without explanation. Those voices can be quite possessive. Great story, L.C.!
This was very interesting. It will be interesting at the end of this year, how many good stories you have started. Even the Moira saga is intriguing. One of my favourite authors is Ray Bradbury, who essentially wrote hundreds of short stories. Some of them just happened to be connected. Perhaps you will have book of shorts.
You must be careful of those fae folk! You never know what they might be up to. Some are good, some are mischievous, and others are much worse. I love this story. Very ominous and suspenseful.
I love that the mother becomes the foil of the narrator and that she teaches them, by consequence, to understand where the voices are coming from. Then, the mother almost gives the narrator permission to acknowledge what she's suspected to have been true the entire time. Brilliant. I have endless respect for writers who can accomplish so much in so few words. Well done.
Fantastically creepy! Love this one - great writing.
This could turn into all sorts of fun stories! Dark Fantasy, Horror, or even Mystery!
Dark mysterious!!! Left a heart ♥
Oh that was dark and beautiful! Really love stories about fairies and people who vanish into their world, be they friend or fiend. Really enjoyed this one, LC! Brilliantly done!
That was creepy, and very well done.
You've done it again...drawn me in!!
An ominous and enchanting little tale!