Tomorrow
Random word generation microfiction: flawed, speed, gas.
Looking in the mirror, all I noticed was my flawed skin. Bumps and scars. Discolored. Pale. Gaunt - Unrecognizable. I re-covered the surface with the towel at once.
The house was cold. The sun was beginning to set, low behind the hills. Night creeping up; again.
One more night. I only need to survive one more night.
It had been 7 months since the grid went out. Give or take. I stopped counting. Half of the county died within the first 2 weeks, primarily due to violence. The radios went dark shortly after. I was alone on the hill, surviving off of sheer willpower and spite. Not another man for miles. Safe in the place I always called home.
I stalked to the porch, watching the sky change from red to grey. A ritual. Sitting on the edge of the deck was the last canister of gas I had. Liquid gold. My lifeline. Enough to take me into town and back. My stomach growled, but it would have to wait until tomorrow. I would need to make the most of it.
The hum of an engine revved up the dirt road. I froze in place, my heart beating fast.
Headlights made their way around the corner, creeping closer with each shaky breath until they finally came into view. Horrifically bright; blinding.
I grabbed the can, turned on my heels, and ran. But my speed would be my downfall, my starving heart giving out within twenty steps.
Tomorrow would never come.
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Ashley Lima
I think about writing more than I write, but call myself a writer as opposed to a thinker.
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Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳
Wow! This was so good!
Crikey! This is a dark tale, excellently written. What an ending.
What a compelling story! I didn't stop watching till the very end because of the intense feelings and striking pictures.
Intriguing work Ashley! Congrats!! ☺️👍
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Very well written. I am so sad that your main character died. I was hoping he/she would be able to eat some food and feel better.
😱 noooooo! Despite knowing the genre I still did not expect that ending. Very well done!
Really gripping writing! You match your style so perfectly to the microfiction genre- congrats!
Wonderful storytelling. Congrats on the TS.
Excellent storytelling. I really enjoyed this.
WOW! That was so much detail in so few words. Terrific!
The story captures the essence of a post-apocalyptic world so well.
Yes, they died! I'm satisfied, lol! I wonder who it was that came driving. Loved your story!
I like how you weaved the words together to create not only a background but the character's demise.
nice ending
Oh so good, Ashley! Did give me some anxiety tho lol.
Wow, this had me on edge!!!!! I wish there was more!
Great work’! Enjoyed! To bad about the heart situation!
Interesting
That's some tightly knit narrative for sure. I like how we don't even know the cause of this apocalyptic emergency, and your abrupt ending. Great work!