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Tomorrow

Random word generation microfiction: flawed, speed, gas.

By Ashley LimaPublished 8 months ago Updated 8 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - February 2024
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Tomorrow
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Looking in the mirror, all I noticed was my flawed skin. Bumps and scars. Discolored. Pale. Gaunt - Unrecognizable. I re-covered the surface with the towel at once.

The house was cold. The sun was beginning to set, low behind the hills. Night creeping up; again.

One more night. I only need to survive one more night.

It had been 7 months since the grid went out. Give or take. I stopped counting. Half of the county died within the first 2 weeks, primarily due to violence. The radios went dark shortly after. I was alone on the hill, surviving off of sheer willpower and spite. Not another man for miles. Safe in the place I always called home.

I stalked to the porch, watching the sky change from red to grey. A ritual. Sitting on the edge of the deck was the last canister of gas I had. Liquid gold. My lifeline. Enough to take me into town and back. My stomach growled, but it would have to wait until tomorrow. I would need to make the most of it.

The hum of an engine revved up the dirt road. I froze in place, my heart beating fast.

Headlights made their way around the corner, creeping closer with each shaky breath until they finally came into view. Horrifically bright; blinding.

I grabbed the can, turned on my heels, and ran. But my speed would be my downfall, my starving heart giving out within twenty steps.

Tomorrow would never come.

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About the Creator

Ashley Lima

I think about writing more than I write, but call myself a writer as opposed to a thinker.

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Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  2. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  3. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  1. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

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  • Anna 3 months ago

    Congrats on Top Story!🥳🥳🥳

  • Caroline Craven3 months ago

    Wow! This was so good!

  • Rachel Deeming3 months ago

    Crikey! This is a dark tale, excellently written. What an ending.

  • What a compelling story! I didn't stop watching till the very end because of the intense feelings and striking pictures.

  • Grz Colm3 months ago

    Intriguing work Ashley! Congrats!! ☺️👍

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Very well written. I am so sad that your main character died. I was hoping he/she would be able to eat some food and feel better.

  • Caroline Jane3 months ago

    😱 noooooo! Despite knowing the genre I still did not expect that ending. Very well done!

  • Gabriel Huizenga3 months ago

    Really gripping writing! You match your style so perfectly to the microfiction genre- congrats!

  • Cathy holmes3 months ago

    Wonderful storytelling. Congrats on the TS.

  • Judey Kalchik 3 months ago

    WOW! That was so much detail in so few words. Terrific!

  • Test7 months ago

    The story captures the essence of a post-apocalyptic world so well.

  • Yes, they died! I'm satisfied, lol! I wonder who it was that came driving. Loved your story!

  • Mark Gagnon8 months ago

    I like how you weaved the words together to create not only a background but the character's demise.

  • Sid Aaron Hirji8 months ago

    nice ending

  • Mattie :)8 months ago

    Oh so good, Ashley! Did give me some anxiety tho lol.

  • Jazzy 8 months ago

    Wow, this had me on edge!!!!! I wish there was more!

  • Alex H Mittelman 8 months ago

    Great work’! Enjoyed! To bad about the heart situation!

  • Mother Combs8 months ago

    Interesting

  • Rob Angeli8 months ago

    That's some tightly knit narrative for sure. I like how we don't even know the cause of this apocalyptic emergency, and your abrupt ending. Great work!

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