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The Scorpion's Sting

A Tale of Intent and Design

By Monique NelsonPublished 10 months ago 15 min read
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Disclaimer: This image was generated by AI art creation program, MidJourney. This story was also assisted by AI in order to evoke the tone and structure of a time-honored fable, but the story, plot and writing is entirely my own.

Many eons ago, in the heart of the sun-scorched desert, lay a tranquil oasis - a haven where life flourished amidst the unforgiving sand dunes. Palm trees stood like sentinels around the glittering blue-green water, their leaves rustling gently in the breeze. Flowers bloomed in audacious colors, their petals a stark contrast to the sandy palette of the desert. Here, under the endlessly clear sky, creatures of all kinds coexisted harmoniously, their lives woven together in a tapestry of peace and mutual respect.

In this serene refuge, there lived a kind-hearted scorpion named Scorpius. Unlike many of his kin, feared for their lethal sting, Scorpius was known far and wide for his gentle nature. His ebony exoskeleton glinted in the sun, and his alert eyes always held a gentle warmth. But it was his truly caring and helpful nature that endeared him to all his fellow desert-dwellers.

Scorpius was often seen helping the elderly tortoises reach the succulent cacti fruits, using his formidable pincers with surprising delicacy. He regularly cleared the pathways of sharp pebbles, mindful of the delicate paws of the desert hares. When the winds swept the desert, creating mighty sandstorms, he would offer his burrow as a shelter to anyone in need, welcoming every creature, from the smallest ant to the largest camel, at least as much of them as would fit through the opening.

Scorpius’s generosity was as boundless as the desert itself.

Thus, Scorpius, despite being a creature often feared, had found a way to thrive in harmony with his neighbors, his actions echoing louder than any fearsome reputation. His life was a testament to the fact that true strength lay not in one's ability to harm, but in one's capacity to show kindness, making the peaceful oasis an even safer sanctuary for all its inhabitants. And so, it was in this atmosphere of camaraderie and mutual respect that our tale begins.

***

In the heart of the oasis, amidst the rustling palm leaves and the symphony of wildlife, was a treasured tradition: The Great Oasis Gathering. Once every year, as the desert sun dipped below the horizon, painting the sky with hues of orange and crimson, the creatures would convene. A celebration of unity and cooperation, it was a spectacle as vibrant and warm as the desert sun itself.

Anticipation rippled through the oasis like the warm desert wind. The usually placid tortoises picked up their pace, their slow, steady steps quickening with excitement. The desert hares, ears twitching with eagerness, were already practicing their leaps and bounds for the talent exhibition. Even the stoic lizards could be seen preening, bronzing their scales to a fine shine under the gentle glow of the setting sun.

At the center of this excitement was Scorpius.

The gathering was more than just a celebration; it was a testament to the peace they had fostered and the community they shared. The anticipation of the festivities and camaraderie sent a warm course of liquid energy flowing through his body.

Days before the gathering, he began his preparations. With careful precision, he decorated his burrow with the vibrant petals of desert flowers, their colors reflecting beautifully against his shiny black armor. He painstakingly crafted small gifts for his friends, weaving together dry grass and flower petals, his pincers deftly creating delicate tokens of friendship.

Even the preparations for the Great Oasis Gathering were celebratory, each creature playing a valuable part, the resulting harmony a testament to their unity and cooperation.

Little did the desert creatures know, this year’s celebration would hold a greater significance in the life of their gentle friend, Scorpius.

***

One day, as Scorpius was gathering more petals to gift his friends, he came across a wise old tortoise. Terrance was well known to the desert dwellers as the sage of the sands. As old as the desert itself, Terrance’s shell was a mosaic of time, each individual crevice having a story to tell. Seeing the busy Scorpius, the tortoise beckoned to him with a slow, gentle nod of his weathered and leathery head.

With a voice as grainy as the desert sand, he called out. “Scorpius, I have a tale to tell. An ancient one, as old as the oasis itself."

Honored to listen, Scorpius scuttled over as quickly as his little legs would carry him.

"Scorpius, listen well.” Terrance cleared his throat and stretched his neck out, long and limber, ready to share the prophecy with the deference it deserved.

“There's an old story that's been passed down from generation to generation, telling of a curse older than the oldest cactus that graces our desert. It involves you, Child of the Sands, and your kin, the scorpions. Your sting holds a secret, and I’m sorry to say, my friend, a misfortune.

Legend tells us of a time when the scorpion was without a stinger, my dear Brother of the Dunes. Once, in the era of shadows long cast, a boastful scorpion sought to rule the desert, demanding respect not through kindness, but through fear.

The gods, observing this arrogance, sought to humble the scorpion. They bestowed upon it a stinger, a symbol not of strength, but of consequence. It was a reminder of humility, and a testament that power can be both a defense and a burden. It can protect, yes, but in the absence of wisdom and restraint, it can cause great suffering.

Along with the stinger, the gods spoke a prophecy, a curse. There would come a day when the scorpion's sting would take on an even darker form.

Your sting, once a symbol of consequence, is destined to become a vessel of despair, bearing an agony that extends beyond physical pain, touching the very spirit of any creature it grazes. Your peaceful intent will not matter, as your sting could inflict hurt without your volition.

Beware, Scorpius, for the sands whisper that this time is upon us, and you, Bearer of the Sting, stand at the heart of this ancient prophecy.”

Exhausted by this long monologue, the wise sage slowly retreated back into his shell.

Fear coursed through Scorpius' veins, a frozen chill despite the heat of the burning desert.

From inside his safe haven, Terrance uttered a final, echoing admonishment:

“In the face of adversity, we find our true strength. When the trials come, welcome them, for it's not the challenges we face that define us, but how we rise to meet them."

Shook to his very core, Scorpuis looked at his stinger, its shadow casting an ominous silhouette on the desert floor. A tremor of uncertainty ran through him, a sharp contrast to his usually steadfast nature.

With Terrance's words echoing in his mind, Scorpius began his journey back to the oasis, his heart heavy with foreboding. The thought of causing his fellow desert dwellers harm in any way, even unintentionally, was a burden too big to bear.

Returning to the oasis, Scorpius was dizzy from an internal storm of emotions. The cool desert night brought no solace and the twinkling stars above, usually a source of peace and joy, only reflected the darkness brewing within him.

Looking at his reflection in the serene waters of the oasis, his stinger cast a dark shadow under the moonlight, a certain symbol of impending doom. A shroud of despair fell upon poor, gentle Scorpius.

Full of anxiety, he crept back to his burrow and spent the night alone, ashamed, and unsure of his future path.

***

Scorpius was not one to shy away from challenges and with the dawn of a new day, he was determined to overcome this curse with his friends unscathed. He sought counsel from his closest friends, prepared to face the trials that lay ahead.

Seeking wisdom, he turned to his dear friends, Orla, the astute avian, an oasis of wisdom in the desert, and Carmine, a gamboling goliath, whose laughter was a balm to the hearts of all.

They met under the oldest palm tree, their usual rendezvous, and Scorpius recounted Terrance's warning. His voice barely more than a whisper, the gravity of his words hung heavy with unearned guilt in the cool desert air.

Orla listened intently, her feathered brow furrowing in deep thought. Carmine remained uncharacteristically silent, his jovial demeanor replaced with a serious expression.

Scorpius, who had always been a source of kindness and peace, was suddenly expecting to become a source of pain to his community, against his own will.

"I wish not to harm, not even the tiniest ant," Scorpius pleaded, his voice quivering with the weight of his predicament. "My stinger has always been a means of defense, not offense. How can I live with the burden of this curse?"

With much deliberation and sympathy from his friends, Scorpius, Orla, and Carmine determined that there were two potential paths:

Scorpius could continue the life he had always known, remaining dedicated to the peaceful, harmonious life of nurturing the oasis with the hopes that his good nature would overcome the curse.

The other path was uncharted, as he would have to leave his oasis community for their safety and pursue a life of isolation, accepting the pain of loneliness as the price to protect his beloved desert community from his cursed nature.

Scorpius knew he would have to confront this terrible decision, but wasn’t yet confident in the best course of action. He decided to leave on one more journey, one that might lead to a solution that would spare both himself and his oasis from the curse's effects.

***

With newfound determination, Scorpius left the oasis once more, following a winding, instinctive trail through the shifting sands of the vast desert.

The gentle scorpion plunged forward, weathering the relentless sun and gritty, biting winds.

As he journeyed, he came across creatures of all sizes and shapes, from the tiny dung beetles, tirelessly rolling their precious balls, to the regal gazelles, gracefully navigating the sands. Each creature held a piece of wisdom for Scorpius.

At the foot of a towering dune, Scorpius found a stoic beetle, striving against the desert winds. The beetle labored to roll his precious nugget to safer storage. Scorpius was impressed and humbled by the simple beetle’s unrelenting perseverance. This work wasn’t approached as drudgery, but a purposeful and necessary struggle met with well-earned pride at the end of the day.

From this experience Scorpius learned that the greatest of mountains could be conquered by the smallest of creatures with an unbending resolve.

Farther along his path, Scorpius crossed paths with a gazelle. Graceful and swift, the gazelle was a poetry in motion, adapting her steps to the ever-changing sands beneath her. She moved with a dancer’s grace, agile and unfaltering.

From her, Scorpius learned resisting change was a fool’s journey, and there was much more joy, beauty and reliance in learning to dance with the shifting sands of life.

Every creature he encountered was a living testament of enduring strength, inspiring Scorpius with insights to his own nature and his place within the grand design of the desert.

The journey was not without its trials, despite the revelations made. The further Scorpius traveled, the more challenging the terrain became. The more he was physically challenged, the louder his fears and doubts whispered in his mind, and the more desperately lonely he became.

Yet, he trudged on. Thoughts of his desert community fueled his heart filled with hope and focused his mind on his goal.

Little did he know, his next encounter would bring him considerably closer to the solution he sought.

***

Underneath the blazing sun, a majestic serpent glimmered in the haze of the sun’s heat. This was Seraphina.

The enchanting serpent had an enigmatic aura that promised ancient knowledge for those able to charm it from her.

Scorpius approached, a sense of reverence so strong, his black exoskeleton took on a reddish hue.

Seraphina’s hypnotic eyes greeted him expectantly. She knew why he had come.

The winds had whispered his name and the subtle shift in the desert's heartbeat had signaled his arrival. With a slow, deliberate uncoiling, she addressed the small scorpion.

“Welcome, Scorpius,” she hissed softly, her voice a cool whisper, harmonizing with the warm breeze.

Her scales shimmered as she slithered, each one reflecting the sun’s rays into a thousand tiny spectrums of light, hypnotizing anyone who gazed too intently. Her gaze held Scorpius’, an unblinking connection between them and the unseen, esoteric elements of existence.

Scorpius felt an uncanny sense of familiarity, a deep comfort that defied the typical associations with her serpentine nature. Her greeting was more than words, it was an invitation to explore the depths of his own nature, a soothing, lulling promise of guidance through the labyrinth of his fears and doubts.

With Scorpius in such a suggestible state, Seraphina offered her prophetic suggestion.

"The shadows of the past can be dispelled. The sting of despair that your ancestors bear need not be your fate, nor the fate of those who follow in your tracks."

Her eyes, twin pools of cosmic mystery, shimmered with promise as she continued, "The ancient scorpion who carried the first sting was lacking in the virtues that you embody. He was devoid of kindness, he knew not of humility, forgiveness was foreign to him, and empathy was a river whose waters he never drank from."

"Your task, Scorpius, is not merely to exhibit these virtues, but to become them. Make them your breath and your essence; express them in each action, each decision, and each interaction. Find the strength within you to be kind when faced with anger, to remain humble in the face of praise, to offer forgiveness when confronted with a slight, and to empathize with those who stand on the other side of understanding.

“Your journey is not a battle to be won but a universal rhythm to be embraced. Embody these virtues and you will break the ancient curse and set a new path for the scorpions of tomorrow."

As the last word faded into the whispering breeze, Scorpius felt as if he was awakening from a deep sleep, filled anew with determination. With Seraphina's wisdom echoing in his mind, he was ready to turn back toward his home, welcoming the trials awaiting him.

***

With his mind full of awareness, Scorpius imagined trials in all his encounters, and weighed every action and interaction carefully.

The first trial was of Kindness. A frightened young jerboa had become lost in the maze of the desert. Despite his initial hesitation - though he lived in a time of harmony, jerboas were still his most natural predator - Scorpius gently approached the tiny creature, offering it comfort and guiding it towards safety. Showing kindness warmed the small mammal's heart and both creatures left in safety.

Next came the trial of Humility. A prickly pear cactus bore a single, succulent fruit atop its highest branch, far out of reach for the small scorpion. Rather than turning away in defeat, Scorpius acknowledged his limitations. He sought the help of a desert sparrow, thanking her graciously when she kindly fetched the fruit. In his gratitude and humility, Scorpius showed respect for the interconnectedness of all beings.

The trial of Forgiveness presented itself unexpectedly. The desert fox, who had once taunted him for his small size and feared sting, was caught in a thorny bush. Rather than hold onto old grudges, Scorpius chose forgiveness. He delicately used his pincers to free the fox, demonstrating the strength and peace that forgiveness brings.

Lastly came the trial of Empathy. Scorpius encountered a wounded gazelle, its leg tender from a misplaced step. Feeling the creature’s pain as his own, Scorpius showed empathy, staying by the gazelle's side, offering it company and comfort until it could stand again.

As Scorpius embraced each virtue, he could feel a transformation within him, his stinger pulsating with a strange, soothing energy.

With the final trial behind him, Scorpius had come close enough to home to see the silhouettes of all those in attendance at the Great Oasis Gathering, still somewhat in the distance

His body felt lighter, as if his journey had not only shaped his character, but also altered the essence of his being. The virtues of kindness, humility, forgiveness, and empathy now defined him, each an integral part of his very existence.

As he stepped out into the fading light, Scorpius looked up at his once-feared stinger, an instrument of potential harm, now glowing softly with a radiant light. It was no longer a weapon of aggression, but a testament of his journey, a symbol of protection and a mark of his trials.

As the moon ascended to her throne in the star-studded sky, illuminating the vast expanse of the desert, Scorpius, the gentle scorpion, was reborn. With a heart filled with newfound wisdom and love, he made his way down to the Great Oasis Gathering, ready to share his tale and inspire others.

The full moon shone brightly in the clear desert sky, casting an ethereal glow over the lively oasis. The Gathering was in full swing, the joyful chatter and laughter of the assembled creatures a welcoming sound.

The creatures watched in awe as their gentle scorpion friend glowed under the moonlight. With a humble nod, Scorpius began to share his tale. He spoke of his journey, of the wise serpent Seraphina, of the trials he faced, and the virtues he learned. He recounted the transformation of his stinger, from a weapon of aggression to an emblem of protection.

The creatures listened with bated breath, their hearts moved by the scorpion's tale. His words resonated within them, their truth echoing in their souls. They witnessed the power of change, the strength of virtues, and the magic of unity and cooperation.

***

The moral of this tale, my dear reader, transcends the sands of this desert home and reaches into the very essence of life itself. It was a lesson about the transformative power of kindness, humility, forgiveness, and empathy. Even the most feared and dangerous aspects of ourselves can always be turned into symbols of protection and peace through the embrace of virtue.

The creatures of the oasis, deeply moved by Scorpius's journey, vowed to apply these virtues in their own lives. The hummingbird resolved to show more kindness to the desert flowers, the desert hare promised to empathize more with his slower playmates, and the old sage tortoise, Terrance, made a solemn vow to forgive past grievances.

The tale of the Scorpion's Sting, thus, taught a profound lesson: the greatest transformations stem not from changing who we are, but from embracing the virtues within us. It serves as a reminder that true strength lies in kindness, understanding, forgiveness, and empathy, and that even in the face of the harshest trials, these virtues will guide us to our true nature.

Author’s Note:

I’ve long has a fascination or, to be honest, border-line obsession with “moral of the story” type stories like Aesop’s Fables. This challenge was extremely exciting for me - I’ve been working on a collection of short fables for a children’s book anthology of modern day re-tellings of Aesop’s tales.

Those stories, however, are very short, often no more than 500 words. For inspiration on longer narratives, though still short enough to capture the essence of a fable, I went deep into rabbit holes features the works of Hans Christian Andersen, The Brothers Grimm, Rudyard Kipling and, my personal favorites, various collections from Native American folklore.

I knew my tale would have to involve a scorpion. As someone who has conquered severe entomophobia (fear of insects), to the point of not just being ok, but actively enjoying nearly all insect life - scorpions scare the ish out of me. I was stung in Costa Rica and, though they are not very venomous there, they are creepy. They are the creepiest little creepsters I’ve ever come across.

So this fable was my way of trying to … disarm them in my mind.

I hope you’ve enjoyed!

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Monique Nelson

Life is made up of stories. Stories I want to read. Stories I need to write.

Stories aren't better than real life - they are what make real life better.

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