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THE RACE OF LIFE

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By Finimale Sylvester EbutePublished 5 months ago 3 min read
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THE RACE OF LIFE
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In a bygone era, a tale unfolded about a young, athletic boy whose insatiable hunger for success manifested in an unwavering desire to emerge victorious. For him, success was solely measured by the triumph of winning. One day, as he geared up for a running competition in his quaint village, two other spirited boys joined him, attracting a sizable crowd eager to witness the upcoming sporting spectacle.

Word of the little boy's prowess reached the ears of a wise old man who, intrigued, traveled from afar to witness the unfolding event. As the race commenced, it appeared to be a close contest, with all three contenders neck-and-neck as they approached the finishing line. However, summoning unparalleled determination, strength, and power, the young boy surged ahead, claiming the first position.

The crowd erupted in ecstasy, cheering and waving at the triumphant boy. In stark contrast, the wise man remained composed, showing no outward sentiment. Despite the lack of acknowledgment from the sage, the little boy basked in the glow of pride and importance.

A second race was promptly announced, featuring two new challengers eager to test their mettle against the little boy. Once again, the race unfolded, and once again, the boy emerged victorious. The crowd, caught up in the thrill of the moment, showered him with cheers and applause. However, the wise man maintained his stoic demeanor, indifferent to the festivities.

The little boy, feeling emboldened and craving more, pleaded for another race. This time, the wise old man took charge, introducing an unexpected twist. The contenders were no longer young, fit individuals but an elderly, frail lady and a blind man. Bewildered, the little boy protested, questioning the validity of this seemingly unequal race.

The wise man explained that the race was indeed on, and as it unfolded, it became apparent that the boy was the sole finisher. The other two challengers stood at the starting line, leaving the boy ecstatic but puzzled by the muted response from the crowd.

Perplexed, the little boy queried the wise man about the audience's lack of enthusiasm. The wise man, with a gentle smile and a nod, directed the boy to race once more. This time, however, he set a unique condition—they were to finish together.

Pondering this instruction, the little boy positioned himself between the frail old lady and the blind man, taking them by the hand. As they started the race, he deliberately moved at a slow, deliberate pace, ensuring all three crossed the finishing line together.

To the surprise of the crowd, this unconventional conclusion elicited a joyous uproar. Cheers and waves cascaded towards the trio, and even the wise man acknowledged the accomplishment with a approving nod. The little boy, now comprehending the profound lesson, felt a profound sense of pride and importance.

Turning to the wise old man, the boy sought clarity on the crowd's cheers. In response, the sage placed his hands on the boy's shoulders, gazing into his eyes, and softly explained that in this race, the boy had won more than any previous competition. The cheers were not for an individual winner but for the collective triumph of finishing together.

As the poignant story concludes, the narrator reflects on the profound message it conveys about the race of life. The tale prompts contemplation about the motivations driving our pursuits, urging us to question whether success is solely measured by winning. Ultimately, it encourages us to consider who accompanies us on our life's journey and how we navigate the race together, emphasizing that it's not about winning but about how we run the race called life. This motivational story serves as a reminder to embrace the journey with compassion, empathy, and a spirit of togetherness.

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  • Finimale Sylvester Ebute (Author)5 months ago

    I am so proud of this story

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