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The Perfectionist's Eclipse

Adventure Fiction

By Arshad MecciPublished 11 days ago 3 min read
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The director was infamous for his perfectionism, a trait that constantly irked his crew. He demanded take after take, striving for nothing less than perfection. Now, with his most promising film nearing its end, they faced their final night shoot, set in the desert on the roof of a car, featuring a boy and a girl.

"Slow down the kiss," he instructed. The actors complied. "Too slow! Pick up the pace." Again. "Try it with the high beams on." Again. "Shift the car. I want the moon in the frame."

Exasperated, the actors exclaimed, "It's 3 AM! We need some sleep!"

"Do you know how many sleepless nights I spent writing this? You slept last night. Push through," the director retorted.

He held them until around 5 AM before they finally retreated to their trailers. None of the takes met his stringent standards. With just five days left to wrap up filming, the pressure was mounting.

"We're staying up till we nail it. The deadline's looming," the director declared.

"Your obsession is stressing you out. A little imperfection won't hurt," the crew reasoned.

"There's no room for imperfection," he countered.

The girl suggested, "Why not shoot during the day and edit to make it look like night?"

"Absolutely not! Everyone knows scenes like this must be shot at night."

"Sleep happens at night," the boy quipped, drawing laughter from the crew.

Refusing to compromise, the director insisted on getting it right. After another failed attempt, he ordered, "Everyone rest. I'll figure something out."

In the quiet of the night, an idea struck him. A solar eclipse! He quickly Googled the next eclipse and found one due in two years, thirty-three days.

But how to simulate it? He approached the textile team with an audacious plan to create a massive sheet to cover the sun.

"You want to cover the sun? Are you crazy?" they exclaimed.

Offering a hefty sum, the director persuaded them to undertake the mammoth task. Fabric factories around the set were employed, and soon a colossal sheet lay folded in the street, ready to be hoisted by planes.

With pilots skeptical but compliant, the planes took off, tethered to the corners of the gigantic sheet. As they ascended, the crew gathered, skeptical and curious.

Witnessing the sun's gradual disappearance, they stood in awe as darkness enveloped them, simulating night.

"Change costumes. We're filming," the director commanded.

"Did you just create an eclipse?" the bewildered actors asked.

"Exactly. Let's seize the moment."

Despite the ingenious plan, the shot still wasn't perfect. The director instructed the pilots via phone to adjust their positions, while dealing with actors' bathroom breaks and unforeseen challenges.

When the shot was finally taken, the eclipse had passed, and it was daytime again. With no other options left, the crew had to wait for the next eclipse.

Days later, after countless attempts and challenges, the film was completed. The director wasn't entirely satisfied with the final shot, but audiences couldn't tell the difference between the eclipse footage and the night shots.

They did five more takes and then the square was gone again and it was bright. The actors went off into their trailers and there was nothing more he could do. The movie came out. He wasn’t happy with the shot but everyone else was and you really couldn’t tell if it was one of the ones taken under the eclipse or actually at night. And he was happy with that.

In the end, the director's obsessive pursuit of perfection, combined with his innovative approach, resulted in a film that pleased audiences, even if it left him wanting more.

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