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The Cost Of Magic

The Cost of magic

By HannahPublished about a year ago 3 min read
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The Cost Of Magic
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In the land of Aldonia, magic was a real and tangible force. Those who had the gift to wield it were both revered and feared for their abilities. However, there was a catch to using magic - every time a person used it, their life force was drained. The more powerful the magic, the more it drained. As a result, many who regularly used magic found their lifespans shortened, and some even died young.

Despite the dangers, some people saw magic as a tool to be used for personal gain. They used it to acquire wealth, power, and influence, even if it meant sacrificing their own lives. Others viewed magic as a force to be respected and used only in the direst of circumstances. The debate over the use of magic raged on for centuries with no clear answer in sight.

However, one woman named Elspeth was determined to find a solution. Elspeth was born with an incredible gift for magic, but she had also witnessed firsthand the toll it took on those who used it. She refused to let her talent go to waste but was determined to find a way to use magic without sacrificing her own life.

For years, Elspeth delved into ancient texts, consulted with the wisest mages, and experimented with different spells and techniques, seeking a way to harness the power of magic without paying the ultimate price. Eventually, she discovered a way to use magic that didn't drain the user's life force, but instead drew on the ambient magic in the air itself.

Elspeth's breakthrough was a game-changer that would alter the course of Aldonia's history. The debate over magic shifted from whether or not it was worth using for personal gain to how to use magic responsibly and without causing harm to oneself or others.

Elspeth's legacy lived on long after her passing, as generations of mages learned to use magic responsibly and with respect for the delicate balance of life and magic. Although the debate over magic never truly ended, the people of Aldonia learned that with great power came great responsibility. Sometimes, the greatest magic of all was knowing when not to use it.

Elspeth's discovery opened up new avenues for the use of magic. With the fear of death removed from the equation, mages could use their abilities more frequently and with greater confidence. However, the newfound freedom came with a caveat. Just because magic could be used more frequently didn't mean it should be. The responsibility that came with using magic was heightened, and mages had to be more cautious in their use of it.

Some mages continued to use magic for personal gain, but they were few and far between. The majority of mages recognized the potential danger of abusing their powers and used magic only when necessary. They developed a deep respect for the power of magic and understood the need to use it wisely.

As time passed, the people of Aldonia became known for their responsible use of magic. Other lands looked to them as an example of how to use magic wisely and without causing harm. Elspeth's legacy had not only changed the course of Aldonia's history, but it had also impacted the world beyond its borders.

In the end, the debate over the use of magic was not so much about whether or not to use it but rather how to use it responsibly. Elspeth's discovery had shown that magic could be used without sacrificing one's life force. With that barrier removed, the true potential of magic could be explored. However, it was the responsibility that came with that power that ultimately determined how it was used. And for the people of Aldonia, that responsibility was taken very seriously.

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  • Testabout a year ago

    I love any stories about magic and you did it justice. Well written :)

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