Stretching Poor (aka. The Work House)
28th January, Story #28/366
The last night you spend with your children is the most precious, and the most horrifying few hours of your life.
Being poor is stretching. Stretching every penny, stretching your luck, stretching the goodwill of others. All to stretch out the survival of your children, if not yourself.
The workhouse is huge, and grey. Cold, hard and shadowy even in July. I heard in some, there's fair treatment, enough food. Families stay together. Not this one.
It's amazing what a person will tolerate, when here is the alternative. Sick what lows the decent will sink to, what unsellable things they'll sell, what principles they'll turn from.
How cold could I let my babies be before I'll let them be taken from me forever? How stark their ribs before I let strangers shave their heads? How hollow their faces before I surrender them to unknown treatment? For rations, however meagre?
The puppy-fat melted from their bones, and scant childhood joy from their eyes, and still I stretched. Could I stretch our tenancy in that tiny room until the weather warmed?
I couldn't, and now here we are. I haven't told them. All they know is that we're safe, warm, we all had some small amount to eat for a change. I know it's just tonight. That morning will bring a new brutal and lonely reality where we'll eventually not even know one another anymore.
I want to hug them so tight their brittle bones could break. Wail the pain of my love for them to the high, harsh ceiling. Drink in their eyes, steal their smiles to fold in my heart forever.
I want them to memorise these hours as the last and only gift I had left give. But I'm loathe to disturb their peaceful slumber. The first, and perhaps last, in a long time. The littlest is too young to remember anyway, will likely not remember my face.
So, I forfeit sleep. I bathe in every second, choke back sobs, and let the tears sit on my cheeks. I hold them as tight as I dare, and stroke the precious dirty tangles that will be clipped away when the sun rises and breaks my heart.
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Word count (excluding note): 366
Submitted on 28th January at 10.26AM
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The story behind the story, if you're interested: I read "Call the Midwife" years ago, and one story involved a woman who went to the workhouse with her children. They arrived late at night, and were allowed them to spend the first night together before being admitted properly in the morning. There was no happy ending to this true story, unless you count the beginning of social welfare. The whole thing haunted me for years, and sometimes it still comes back to me. This story is my attempt to poultice it out.
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Comments (18)
So well written and a heartbreaking tale of a broken society.
Oh my, this hits hard. Horrifying. You penned this beautifully, however. When I was writing a piece about Jack the Ripper and Victorian London, I read some books that got deep into the horrors of the workhouses, and it was awful. ("Dirty London" and "The People of the Abyss") We like to believe we have evolved beyond this, but I'm not so sure. Humankind often lacks humanity.
Hear me out. Having no kids = having no extra stress/sadness 🤣🤣🤣🤣 Loved your story! It definitely was very evocative!
Gosh this is a belter. Heartbreaking. This is a masterclass in how to convey so much emotion in so few words.
Poverty and heartbreak-really moving
And all I can think is "Oliver" & "Scrooge". Thank you for writing this, L.C. It's powerful & moving.
Oh my. Oh goodness. Oh... This was heartbreaking. Though not a parent, I know the feeling of crushing, stretching love very well. This was masterfully crafted and the 'puppy-fat melting from the bones' hit me like a ton of bricks. Marvelous, LC!
Powerfully written LC
Oh my. This is heartbreaking.
This story is a KEEPER !!!! You captured the heart of the history of poverty. Bravo, L.C.!!
"The puppy-fat melted from their bones, and scant childhood joy from their eyes, and still I stretched." This struck me to the core. Sad, heartfelt story.
"Being poor is stretching. Stretching every penny, stretching your luck, stretching the goodwill of others." The stretch...says it all. And then...from generalities to specifics. Pathos in poetry. Very nicely done.
Ugh!!! Like you said, this one is haunting, yet beautiful in its rendering.
Interesting metaphor here...
"Being poor is stretching...." This is the most relatable and well described.
This is so poignant and painful. The shadow of the workhouse looms long. My Granny would still talk about it as punishment, long after they all closed. (She died in 1991). Poverty as personal failing still runs through public policy. Well done on getting that desperation across.
Loved this. Great work
Call the Midwife is a reservoir where tears are easily siphoned off. Greatly moving story. L.C.