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Smoke

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By Arshad MecciPublished 12 days ago 3 min read
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The sun-baked earth crunched under the feet of the children as they raced along the riverbanks. Weeks without rain had turned the once-flowing river into a dry, dusty expanse. The July heat pressed down on the town like a suffocating blanket, making every breath feel heavy and labored.

Annie led the way, her long blonde hair streaming behind her, laughter echoing in the still air. "Bet you can't catch me!" she taunted, leaping over rocks with ease. Ben, a lanky boy from across the street, pursued her, his face streaked with sweat and dirt. Despite his gangly appearance, he was surprisingly agile, his long legs propelling him forward. Miriam lagged behind, her breaths coming in short gasps as she struggled to keep pace. Her initial enthusiasm for joining the chase had waned, replaced by fatigue and regret.

As Annie dashed past a cornfield, its golden stalks reaching skyward like skeletal fingers, she felt a sharp pain in her side. The air was thick and hazy, smelling of scorched hay and dry earth. Deciding against hiding in the cornfield's dense maze, she cast a glance over her shoulder and saw Ben falling behind. With a triumphant grin, she turned left, aiming for the empty riverbed to make her escape.

But her joy was short-lived. As she descended the sandy slope of the riverbed, her foot struck a hidden obstacle. Pain shot through her ankle, and she tumbled forward, landing hard on her elbows. The riverbed, dry and lifeless, smelled of sand and bones. Tears pricked Annie's eyes as she sat up, disoriented and in pain.

"Ben? Can you hear me?" she called out, her voice tinged with desperation. A sense of relief washed over her when she heard Ben's voice in response.

"Annie?" he called back, appearing at the edge of the riverbed, sweaty and out of breath. He carefully made his way down to her, his concern evident.

"What happened?" he asked, examining her injured ankle with a seriousness that belied his eleven years.

"I fell," Annie whispered, embarrassed by her clumsiness. Ben's examination was interrupted by Miriam's arrival. She looked exhausted, her face flushed and her hair sticking to her forehead.

"Are you okay?" she asked timidly, her eyes filled with concern.

"I'll be fine," Annie reassured her, forcing a smile. With Ben's help, she managed to stand, and they began the slow journey back to town.

Their progress was painstakingly slow, each step marred by pain and discomfort. As they neared the edge of town, a new danger presented itself: the smell of smoke. At first dismissed, the smell soon became too strong to ignore. Memories of a school lesson on wildfires flashed through Annie's mind, filling her with dread.

"We've got to be quick. Let's go," Ben urged, his voice tinged with urgency. The threat of a wildfire added a new layer of fear to their already perilous situation. The trio quickened their pace, their steps becoming more frantic as they tried to outrun the approaching danger.

The edge of town finally came into view, and relief washed over them. The smoke, now visible, billowed ominously in the distance, casting dark shadows on the riverbed. Exhausted and shaken, they crawled up the slope and staggered across the brown grass until they reached the deserted parking lot.

Ben led them to a bench under a tree, and they collapsed onto it, their breaths coming in ragged gasps. The air was thick with tension, their frantic hearts the only sound breaking the silence. As they sat there, trying to catch their breath, Miriam pointed towards the field.

"Look," she whispered, her voice trembling. The smoke, now closer and more menacing, rose from the grass in dark, swirling patterns, casting eerie shadows against the cloudless sky.

The children sat in stunned silence, their ordeal far from over. The threat of the wildfire loomed large, a stark reminder of nature's power and unpredictability. But despite the danger, they found strength in each other's presence, united by their shared experience and determination to make it through the ordeal together.

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