Linden's Flower
An ekphrastic mess
EDIT: I was somehow under the impression that we weren't supposed to credit the creator of the image we were assigned, but that wasn't the case. I'm happy to give credit to Leslie Merrit for the featured image I had the pleasure of using for the challenge.
This one was written for Mackenzie Davis' fun and unique ekphrastic challenge:
The bright little thing had simply appeared on a sunny, spring morning two days ago. There, amongst the litter from the trees and the occasional human, it had emerged from a small, green bud that had courageously pushed its way through the rich, dark soil.
It stood in stark contrast to its surroundings in the shady grove. Mosses, dead leaves, sharp, brittle needles and the other inhabitants of the underbrush paled in comparison.
When evening shadows deepened, it curled its translucent sections as if to block out the cool night air. Or, perhaps, it was simply closing its eyes in peaceful slumber. With the break of day, it opened again to display the intricacies within the protective outer folds.
On its first day, a passing bee lit on it and climbed about, then left, seemingly satisfied. A occasional ant crawled over its surface, probing for food, but soon lost interest and returned to searching the ground.
What was the thing's purpose? It seemed only to be a delightful decoration. It provided no shelter or shade. It could barely be seen, so close it was to the ground and yet, once noticed, it instilled an inexplicable fascination. Its color, structure and apparent texture simply demanded attention.
Linden had quietly observed the little thing for those two days. Her youthful curiosity was piqued, but she had been content to simply study it and wonder. On this, the third day, everything had changed.
As the morning sun had made its way across the sky above the forest, it had somehow sent a shaft of light straight through to the forest floor at Linden's base, where the light rarely reached.
In that shaft of light, the bright little thing glowed.
A more mature tree, perhaps, would simply be too preoccupied with sheltering the fauna of the forest and soaking up the sun for its own use, high above. Linden, however, in her early stages of growth, more shrub than tree, suffered no such preoccupation.
Completely enrapt with her new, dazzlingly briliant companion, Linden focused all her will on a single, leafeless shoot at her base. Slowly, carefully, she laid it gently down and inched it forward, determined to feel that soft, delicate shell and connect to that captivating light.
The forest watched, amused.
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About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stedpad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist and Tech/Internet nerd. Content writer by trade. Vocal Creator by choice.
Comments (32)
Such a beautiful and enchanting little story, Dana! Reminded me of going for walk with my boys—the wonder and magic in the littlest things. Your last line was perfect!
Beautiful short storytelling! The concept really emerged within such a limited space.
Good read !
This was such a beautiful story Dana! It had me yearning for spring time as I was enamoured by the youth's curiosity and how they discovered the world around them! Great work!
So cute & the ending is amazing... "The forest watched, amused."
I hope you were going for cut and playful, cause you nailed it
Dazzling piece!! Beautiful details and great work
It’s amazing how much personality you were able to give an inanimate object (and in 3rd person too no less)! Very wholesome
Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
I live the idea of interaction in this way!
What a cool challenge. I got to learn a new word and new way to push my goal of becoming a better creative writer. Lovely piece, Dana! Congrats on Top Story :)
Congrats on top story!
There is something about this piece that make innocence shine, like that of a child. Your opening line is wonderful d captivates the reader with a subtle touch. Congratulations Dana
Ah nuts. This is great. Like Ms Deeming said. Wholesome, organic and beautifully done and all that from a picture of a flower. Makes mine look pretty shabby lol. Congrats on well deserved Top Story.
A really wholesome organic tale of friendship. To do that from a photo of a flower is pretty cool.
Another well deserved victory. Congratulations Dana
Awesome!!! Loved it!!! 💕❤️❤️ Congratulations on Top Story too!!!
Congrats on the Top Story! This is such a great story! I like the descriptions of the surroundings and the flower.
Congrats on the TS
Oh yes!! Brilliant take on the challenge and what a stunning photo to work from too! 😍
So delicately done Dana, a truly beautiful take on the picture. Loved it!
Ohhh I didn't realise we were supposed to, I also thought we weeren't! Alright...back up to read, I'll change it later!
I only just noticed how that branch looks like a little arm touching the flower! Brilliant take on my photo! I love the magical vibes! 💚
Oh! I didn't credit either, I was being all blank slate anonymous!
Admirable job! Keep up the exceptional work—congrats!