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Life Twice

Thursday 6th June, Story #158/366

By L.C. SchäferPublished 7 days ago 3 min read
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Life Twice
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Smoke stings, burns. Eyes, throat, nose. I'm carrying Emma and Donnie, my youngest.

I stumble. Despite my assurances I'll get you out, my mind sees my babies burn. No answer to that, only a raw scream. I sew it inside my skin with iron, and run.

Outside, I gulp clean night air. Sweet. Brief.

"Stay there!"

They wail after me.

Running back into a wall of heat, covering my face... Something falls. I skitter sideways. I nearly went down, almost left them to burn...

At Darcy's room, I hear, "Mummyyyyy!"

She's OK! Relief! I hold her tight.

"Turn your face into me."

Worryingly, there are no shouts from Brodie or Finn. They're limp, unresponsive.

I should get them out first. But leave her-? No. Bathroom? Can't get to it.

"Piggyback!"

Terror radiates off her. I squash mine, hoping she doesn't see it. Crouch so she can climb on. Clutch the boys to me, stagger to my feet. I welcome Darcy's choking embrace.

Flames against my skin... clothes catching fire. Dreamlike, my legs just won't GO fast enough.

Dumping them on the grass, screaming hoarsely at gawping neighbours: "HELP!!!!"

Sucking cool air down into my burnt lungs-

-running again. Coughing. Skin crackling.

At Anna's room, I look round wildly. Bed empty, smouldering. Not here. Good! The room's almost completely aflame.

"ANNA!" A useless whisper.

Maybe she got to the bathroom before that area was engulfed?

Now I scream, bursting through the furnace. She's in the tub on soaked towels, shower running, horror on her face.

I must look like a monster emerging.

I wrap the towels round us. Cool dampness soaks through; tiny relief.

"Hold me tight, ok?"

"Mum, I ca-"

Can't let her finish that treacherous thought. No way to prepare her, I grab her, and GO.

Oh! We're afire! She's heavy! And scared! If I set her down, she mightn't make it out.

Blind now, smoke worse. Blundering in (please!) the right direction.... I smell cooking flesh. Hear it. The balm I pour into my mind: it's ok, that's just me...

Out on the lawn, I register the fire engine (at last!). Someone's helping Brodie and Finn. I sag, the fire going out of me.

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Word count, excluding note: 366

Submitted on 6th June

*Quick Author's Note*

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  • Cody Dakota Wooten, C.B.C.2 days ago

    This was intense!

  • Caroline Craven6 days ago

    Oof. I’m glad you’re writing short stories as I think I was holding my breath the entire time. This was so good.

  • Christy Munson6 days ago

    Intense and terror-filled, this one sings! Your line: "I sew it inside my skin with iron, and run" knocked me over almost literally. Powerful writing, L.C. Sensational work!!!

  • Cathy holmes6 days ago

    My God, that was intense. 😳

  • Why does this woman has so many kids? Sheeesh! Use protection, lady! Look how much trouble you have to go through to save them. Smh

  • Intense! Did she burn? Is that why the fire went out of her 😱🔥

  • Donna Fox (HKB)7 days ago

    Wow... I think I held my breath the whole time!! So intense and heart stopping, that second last paragraph speaks volumes about a mother's love "I smell cooking flesh. Hear it. The balm I pour into my mind: it's ok, that's just me..." Just breath taking!! Amazing work LC!!

  • Lana V Lynx7 days ago

    So tense and gripping!

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