She gazed into the sky, a bruised canvas of midnight blue, salted with stars. Light shimmered through the pines, leaving splashes of silver on the earth below.
She wasn’t sure anymore.
She had wanted to go, to join Rosamond and Leon on Gliese 667 Cc, but this world was so beautiful. Could she say good-bye? What if Gliese didn’t have forests and trees and grass and bubbling brooks? What if it was just gray dust and empty craters? She took a deep breath, absorbing the ageless beauty of the night sky.
At least she'd still have the stars.
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