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Dreamchild Enterprise

Out of great loss evolves a new way of starting a family. A CEO wrestles with ethics and illusions of control.

By Holly PheniPublished about a year ago 9 min read
Runner-Up in Behind the Last Window Challenge
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Dreamchild Enterprise
Photo by Alexander Grey on Unsplash

For the Behind the Last Window Challenge on Vocal+

She knew nothing of the outside world, but she could see a glimpse through the window in his room. Temperance thought the sky was bluer than usual today, too blue for the occasion. She gazed after her twin as Charity climbed into the car, never pausing to look back at Temperance. Not once.

The atlas was open on her lap, and she stared long after the vehicle turned past the sign with the Dreamchild Enterprise logo: a silhouette of a mother pushing a child on a swing. Strange, since neither she nor the others had ever ridden a swing. They never even went outside – except on their adoption day.

Something felt different, deep inside her gut. She rested a hand on her belly. “Is this pain, Papa?”

“Come away from the window now, Tempy. It will only make you sadder.”

Temperance didn’t budge. She found the city where Charity was being taken on her map and ran her finger over the rivers and roads that would soon lie between them. “How far away is Seattle?”

“From here?”

“Yes, from Boston. From here.”

“It’s too far for you to go on foot, if that’s what you’re thinking about.”

“Kids can go farther on foot than adults can. We have more energy – you always say so.”

He smiled a little, and a rueful chuckle escaped his lips, but only for a moment. The CEO of Dreamchild knew that to go out alone would pose infinitely greater hazards for a child than for an adult in today’s world. Even if a child had the physical strength – there was the black market to worry about. Some people were never satisfied.

“Will she come back?”

“No.”

“Will I go too, someday? Even if I go to a different family?”

He rubbed a weathered hand over his graying hair, averting his dark eyes from her piercing gaze. “It’s not simple, the process of deciding who will go.”

She knew he was right. Her short life had been anything but simple so far, with all the specialists. Still, she couldn’t help hoping. “Maybe someone won’t mind about my problem. There must be someone.”

“Our clients only get one chance to match. One child for all their lives. Most see an imperfect as a waste of that singular opportunity to be parents. You must accept it at some point.”

“If I am not to go, what will happen to me?”

“You will stay with me, my daughter.”

“You said you would try putting me on sale first.”

“You’ve been on sale for months. Ever since the specialists told us there was nothing more to be done.”

Tempy sank into her chair. “We were supposed to be perfect. The first identical twins. We had the same programming, why didn’t it work?”

“What’s perfect, anyhow?” He studied the child with her inquisitive eyes. From the first day he could tell she was different. Not merely because of her imperfections, but there was something else. She was a soul in a soulless world. “Charity won’t remember. She’ll be happy. Surely that must mean something to you.”

“Only because you had her reprogrammed. I want her to be happy with me, the way we were.”

“If I could reprogram you to forget as well, you know I would. To spare you.”

He sighed. The world had lost its soul when it lost its children. Families yearning for traditional domesticity were forced to adopt lifelike androids from companies like Dreamchild or Future Family. It generated ongoing business – replacement parts, replacement children as they aged. They could transfer memories from the younger model to the teenaged model, or parents could keep their child little for as long as they wanted.

Giving care, feeling needed, contributing to the future of society -- all primal desires. How long could we trick ourselves into believing that androids were a suitable substitute for flesh and blood children? Or perhaps the real question was, what if they were?

Tempy turned from the window as the car turned out of sight. Tears carved silent rivers down her face. “I’m glad you can’t reprogram me. I’m glad I can feel – even when it’s hard.”

“It’s why you’re the only one who gets to see the window. The others wouldn’t understand.”

Temperance wasn’t sure how to respond. She would have traded a thousand windows to go with her sister, but they wouldn’t allow it. All because her feelings couldn’t be moderated the way the others could. She was an “imperfect,” born with a defect in her programming, that was what the specialists said. “Everyone’s imperfect.”

Papa was silent.

“Everyone’s imperfect. It’s one of our lessons in class. If we’re too perfect, we’ll creep the parents out, so we’re supposed to know that mistakes are ordinary. Everyone makes mistakes. No one is perfect. So why does it matter that I’m imperfect?”

The man they called “Papa” stood and approached the window seat. “Making mistakes is very different than being an imperfect. We offer prospective parents the comfort of knowing that emotions can be moderated. It prevents certain very dangerous acts that can at times be promoted by...emotions.” He placed a hand on her hair, falling in ringlets over her shoulders. She knew nothing of the outside world, how could he possibly convey the toll of bearing emotions in a world without small animals or children?

The sonic wave had caused sudden death to all whose brains couldn’t withstand the force. The aftermath was a mayhem of grief. Many had felt they couldn’t go on. His wife…

“Is this really the last window in the world, Papa?”

“Most shattered in the blast and were replaced with cement. People hope that –”

“That if it happens again that will keep them safe?”

“Yes. I think it’s a smokescreen. Without windows, without light, afraid to stay outside too long – it doesn’t help the crises of emotion. I need to wake up each morning and see that there is still light to shine. I guess the richest man in the world has that luxury.”

“Can I sleep in here tonight? On the window seat? I need to see the light again too.”

“Of course.” She didn't need to know this would be her last night on earth. Like all imperfects, she would be turned off and recycled. Her memories stored in a database for research. That was what he was told, but the technology was still so new.

“Tell me again where the children went.”

There once was a piper who danced into town, playing a tune on his pipe. The children were hypnotized by the music, and they began to gather around the man, ignoring their parents’ warnings…

“The pied piper…”

Tempy couldn’t sleep. Stars filled the night sky. She wondered if all the living children were up there watching over the droids.

What would happen when all the parents passed away and all that was left on earth were android children? Would there be a purpose to living if no one had a soul and memories could be altered by the push of a button? It was her imperfection talking – the other kids never thought about these things. Their purpose was to make the parents happy. “Then, what’s my purpose?” she whispered to the stars.

She was sure they winked back.

Papa told her that everyone has a purpose, even imperfects. It made her feel loved and wanted. He fought for her, but when it all came down to the recycling, he told her someday they may have no choice.

She tiptoed to where he had stacked the atlas by the closet in the corner. One book on the shelf had no words on its spine, and curiosity prevailed. Of course, she wanted to know what was inside that one first.

Tempy sat back down on the window seat and opened the cover by the light of the moon. A gasp escaped her lips, almost loud enough to wake Papa from across the room, and she covered her mouth with her hand. Looking up at her from the book was her own face, but it wasn’t her – was it?

There she was, sitting on a pretty woman’s lap, and Papa had his arm around them both. She couldn’t remember the day. They were outside, behind them she saw swings – just like the one on the Dreamchild logo.

Something pounded in Tempy’s chest, pounding inside her ears until it hurt. She pushed up the pink spotted leg of her pajamas to look at the serial number on her ankle. She was just like the others, wasn’t she? Except that she was imperfect.

“What’s imperfect?” she touched her chest and felt the same pounding as before. She’d always assumed it was part of her inner workings, but tonight it seemed to be speaking to her. She was imperfect because she was alive.

It wasn’t as difficult to open the window as she’d always imagined it would be. The grass felt different than she expected – it was soft, and damp, and she shivered in the chill of the wind. Atlas under one arm and photo album under the other, she knew only one thing. She was going to Washington.

The morning brought a wave of panic over the Dreamchild factory. When the CEO saw the open window and the single photo dropped onto the floor in her hurry to escape, he fell to his knees. “I should have told her.” He said to the air. “I should have told her she wasn’t a droid.”

A young handler stood several feet behind him, giving respect to the older man in his grief. He hesitated to speak, but dared, “Was she not to be recycled today, Sir?”

“I tried everything. Creating friends for her, even a twin, but the loneliness prevailed. She has no memory of her mother, no memory of the incident or the months that followed. She was in a coma. When she woke without memories – just like the droids – it seemed like the easiest solution, emotionally. To be the last human child in a generation would have been too big a burden to bear. Wouldn’t it?”

“It’s not my place to say, Sir.”

“It would have been peaceful, at least. She would have gone to her mother and they both could have been happy again.” The man they called “Papa” slumped to the floor, the loneliness of his making now deeper than anyone else's on earth. The mastermind of Dreamchild Enterprises without a child -- what a cruel irony. “Come back, Temperance! Tempy, come home!”

The handler stood at attention, silent. He thought the old man sounded utterly mad -- but what did he know about such things? He was only a droid, after all.

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Holly Pheni

This page is for dreamchasing, adventure, and catharsis. Hope my musings connect with others out there.

Blog: flyingelephantmom.com

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  • MANOJ K 9 months ago

    Wow super keep writing awesome buddy visit my posts and subscribe mine too thank you have a nice day 😊

  • Naveedkk 10 months ago

    well done

  • Donna Renee10 months ago

    I don’t know how I hadn’t seen this one before!! This is so deep. And sad… and beautiful. I love the layers you wove into this and the complexity of the choices that were made! ❤️

  • K. C. Wexlar10 months ago

    Came here after I saw your micro fiction - this is also wonderful. great story and creative elements!

  • Mackenzie Davis10 months ago

    Wow, the world building was done so seamlessly. I took note of that, as you carefully trickled in the background, rather than front-loading it, something that I don't see enough of. Tempy is such an interesting character here; I was totally on board with her being a droid, especially since she seemed to have a maturity and grasp on certain concepts that I wouldn't have expected from a human child. But to learn that she is, in fact, the last living child, I had to reconfigure my understanding of her, which was so cool. The way you revealed it, through her heart beating (and the photo), was perfect, not too much, enough to switch POV in the final section. Such great storytelling! I'm now contemplating what will happen to Tempy when she goes to Washington. If she finds her droid twin, will she realize the disparity between them? How will she find acceptance? It's a melancholic ending, to be sure. I'm going to be thinking about this one for a while yet.

  • Hamza Shafiqabout a year ago

    keep inspiring us well done

  • J. S. Wadeabout a year ago

    How did I miss this. Masterful Holly. And congrats 🥰

  • Thavien Yliasterabout a year ago

    This is a phenomenal story, Holly. My curiosity wants to know who caused the sonic blast and why? It also makes me wonder about why reproduction hasn't brought more babies into the world again. Did the blast also destroy the reproductive gonads of the adults? Women are born with all of their eggs and men keep reproducing sperm until old age makes them infertile. Were there no cryogenic banks of eggs, sperm, and frozen embryos that had survived the sonic blast? As for Tempy, being the last living child is a huge burden. Not just for scientist that would wish to clone her and keep her barred within a security base to ensure her longevity from another potential attack, but also the black markets still foster a world that's just as perverse only more desperate than the one before the blast. Traffickers, traders, all the rotten lot only to be driven by desperation, especially in a world where scarcity creates value; it's disgusting what people are willing to do. Regardless, if anything I do hope that Tempy's father does go and search for her, and that he finds her.

  • 💯🎯✌️😍Great Story❗❗

  • TJ Roddyabout a year ago

    As a father, this hit in a relatable way. The premise of the movie Elf, run further. Pleasure to read. I never had to take a break and walk around when reading a short story. Until now.

  • JBazabout a year ago

    Wonderful characters and writing, so well deserved

  • Tiffany Gordon about a year ago

    Phenomenal work Holly! I'd love to see a part 2 to this brilliant story. What an exciting piece! Great plot, great characters; great storytelling! BRAVO my friend! Congrats on placing! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾🎉🎉🎉🎉🎉

  • Babs Iversonabout a year ago

    Congratulations!!!

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Oh, I loved this so much! I really enjoyed Temperance and all the character development. You did an amazing job here, Holly! Pulled me in right until the end!

  • Dana Stewartabout a year ago

    Congratulations! Great story with a lot of character development. Loved it.

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Congrats on placing. Well deserved.

  • Novel Allenabout a year ago

    Wonderful plot and a really great story.

  • C. H. Richardabout a year ago

    Omg I loved this story! This line "she was a soul in a soul less world." ❤️❤️❤️❤️. Well done!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    I loved the plot twist! This was engaging, emotional and well written. Really great work, Holly :) And thank you so much for adding me to your profile. I greatly appreciate it!

  • KJ Aartilaabout a year ago

    This is such a well-written and sadly beautiful story.

  • Antoinette L Breyabout a year ago

    Sort of sad, but very well written, and engaging

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    This is great. Really well done.

  • Gosh, Holly, this was so brilliant! Loved the concept you used for your dystopian world. Did not see that plot twist coming and I loved it! This was a very fantastic story!

  • Great take on the challenge, and an excellent dystopian story in itself, brilliant.

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