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Can I Get You Another?

5th March, Story #65/366

By L.C. SchäferPublished 2 months ago 3 min read
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There's no sign outside. You might wonder how anyone ever finds it. Rest assured: word gets around.

Duck behind the second hand shop, scuttle down the crooked alley, turn left. See that man there wearing overalls, hat pulled over his eyes? Or maybe today, he looks like he's on a cigarette break. Say the right words, and if he likes the look of you, he might unlock the chain on the dilapidated door behind him.

Go on, go inside. It doesn't match the exterior at all, which is dull, grey and unkempt. No: in here it's softly lit; gentle lamps overhead and well-positioned spotlights at each table. The bar itself is all gleaming wood and brass. Look around; admire the nooks in the exposed stone walls. It's busier than it seems at first glance. The quiet you hear when you first step inside is not the quiet of an absence of patrons. There are lots of people in the various booths, but the chatter is minimal. People trade words as if they are costly, and utter them in gentle murmurs. There's a whiff of vanilla.

The wrong customer will think there's no atmosphere, but he'd be wrong. There is one; it's thick and heavy, like a weighted blanket. Pull it 'round yourself, sidle up to the bar. Pick the stool next to the woman with a head of curls and a hint of mischief in her demeanour. Her head is tilted forward, intent on the screen inlaid into the bartop. A smile tweaks her lips. Be patient! Don't interrupt. Pick your moment. Catch the barman's eye, lean in, place your order. No need to yell; you're not competing with loud music here.

She glances over, looks up through dark lashes. Go on! Ask her!

"Excuse me? Miss? Can I get you a story?"

She taps the bartop with one finger, where the screen glows blue-white and lights her face. She tells you she'd like that; she's almost finished with this one.

Her eyes rove over the bookshelves above the barman.

He feels her gaze, glances over. Do it, buy her next one. Can't hurt, right?

"Another 500 word micro, please, and whatever this lady is reading."

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Word count (excluding note): 366

Submitted on 5th March at 22:50

*Quick Author's Note*

First, and most importantly: thank you for reading!

Leave me a link to your own latest story, if I haven't already seen it!

If you enjoyed this story, the best compliment you can give me is to share it, or read another.

Pay no attention to the writer behind the curtain: This is just a pub I would like to exist.

A Year of Stories: I'm writing a story every day this year. This one makes a 65 day streak. You can find all of them in my Index post.

Thank you

Thank you again! I do my best to reciprocate all reads.

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L.C. Schäfer

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  • Charlene Ann Mildred Barroga2 months ago

    Something like this would be great if you could order stories with your beverages, fostering a sense of literary magic and community.

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    Lol, sign me up!

  • So wonderful good job God bless

  • Well now, that's my kind of bar!

  • Caroline Craven2 months ago

    So good. Can feel my shoulders relax as I read this. Beautiful. And I wish it really existed.

  • D.K. Shepard2 months ago

    Loved this! The writing, the ambience of the imagery, and the premise of a book bar!!

  • PJ Watts2 months ago

    This would be wonderful! What a great idea!

  • Hannah Moore2 months ago

    This is fun, but I cant quite imagine it - I think the chatter would be incessant, we do so love to SHARE stories.

  • Oooo, it would be sooooo awesomeeee if this place actually exists! Loved your story!

  • Alex H Mittelman 2 months ago

    Booze and books! Nothing better! Great story! Can we go to the book bar together??? That would be so cool!

  • JBaz2 months ago

    Lol. Love the description and atmosphere then finding out what kind of bar . Great

  • Hayley Matto2 months ago

    SO FUN! I want to visit a literary speakeasy!!

  • John Cox2 months ago

    Atmospheric brilliance … laugh out loud twist. Really superb storytelling!

  • Chloe2 months ago

    oooh i love this! this is so interesting, and i love the way you describe the atmosphere in the room. perfect work

  • Rachel Deeming2 months ago

    L.C., I love this. I want to go there and have one of those sample nights that they do with Belgian fruit beers except the book equivalent. Please tell me its location. I'm begging you.

  • Very interesting... Honestly seems like a fascinating business idea! The world could use more places like this.

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