Moonlight trickled in, bathing her face in a soft glow. He could see every perfect imperfection as his eyes traced her form. How pale freckles dappled the bridge of her nose. How her lips pouted even in dreams.
He was undeniably lost.
Her beauty and brilliance made him desperate for the impossible. But the bitter truth remained–his duty forever trumped love.
And she'd never know.
His frantic lips sought hers trying to quell the crushing anguish, waking her with a moan of pleasure as their bodies joined. The air around them humming with his unspoken prayer,
Vergeef me, mijn liefje.
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This is sultry and tempting. The Dutch is a nice touch, although I must admit I had to consult Google.
As always so impressive
So having a moment- lol Perfect little read just before bed. Jason Momoa can be speaking whatever language he wants - lol 🥰
Very sexy!
So spicy! Had to google translate that last line
Damn! This was fabulous!
Fabulous writing HH! Go gurl! 👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾👏🏾
Very sexy and romantic 🥰
Excellent work as always
Awesome writing, but you're such a nerd. I had to do lots of research into what the last line meant. Well, by lots, I mean right-clicked and searched on Google and then translated, lol. Well done, though!
Well, uh, he fucked up. I mean, he fucked her up, but he fucked himself up too. Either way, damn, way to make this nice and steamy without treading the lines of having this instantly shoved into filthy. This was done with class and etiquette. I need to learn to write something like this.
My cousin is from Amsterdam so I recognised the Dutch though I didn't know the meaning. Randy saved me the time to Google translate it, lol! Also, it's a vicious cycle isn't it, men screwing up and seeking forgiveness? Love your story!
You do know how I struggle with not embarrassing myself when you write things like this, right? "Forgive me, my love," in Dutch. Did you know there is a novel by that name, "Vergeef me, mijn liefje" by Marie Louise Fischer that is about to be released? (I found it on Dodo.) I'm thinking she's gonna be able to guess it, though, right?
well now, what has he done 🧐
I don't normally go in for sexy ones, but I love the descriptions here 😁
Yes, I know him 😆👀
What a sexy piece for a cheating fucker. Bloody well done.
First off great title( had me worried , you’ll see if you read my next micro) But you went in a wonderful direction.
heart wrenching...great story
Excellent opening, Heather! ❤️