All of the Colors
and the ones that are lost
The body that lay outside was blue. The inside of the cabin was blue as well. Not literally blue, of course. Standard log cabin, brown, with a lit fireplace. Half empty bottle on a wooden table. But the room felt blue.
The man inside the cabin thought color was a funny thing. The snow falling outside was as white as anything you’d ever see, as was the ice. But white, the man knew, was not a color. It was a shade. Comprised of all hues on the color spectrum.
Color itself is simply light reflected back into our own eyes. It is perceived strictly through our sense of vision. But to say that a room feels blue would not sound odd to anyone. They would know exactly what was meant by the statement. Perhaps it’s not color that exists at all but merely our perception of it.
That was true of all things, the man supposed. Including the dead guy outside. The red and orange spikes danced in the fireplace as he pondered this. If no one found him, maybe he never existed. The man took another drink which only affirmed his thoughts. Guilty of fratricide, no. How could he be guilty of killing a man that never existed? He chuckled nervously.
The man stood grabbing his shovel. He walked past the pool of red on his way out the door. He dragged the blue body out into the white storm, to be lost forever among all of the colors.
About the Creator
Dakota Smothers
Lover of all stories, regardless of genre! Doing my best to tell a few of my own.
Reader insights
Outstanding
Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
Top insights
Compelling and original writing
Creative use of language & vocab
Eye opening
Niche topic & fresh perspectives
Heartfelt and relatable
The story invoked strong personal emotions
Comments (9)
Congrats on Top Story!🥳
This is a great story, and so well written. Congrats on the TS.
Still getting used to sharing my writing publicly so thanks so much for all the likes/comments!
It is so hard to tell a compelling story in such few words. But, you smacked it right on the head! Congratulations.
Has a dark feeling to the story
Love your imagery with this, the process of thought and reality. Really nice Congratulations
Oooh. This went dark and I love it. Descriptions were spot on. Well done on telling this story in such few words, a skill in itself!
Bravo for your work! Keep it going—congrats!
If a man gets killed in the wilderness, was he ever really there? Great piece!