A Tooth For A Tooth
The nerve of him
Counterclockwise, then clockwise, my fingers move. It's all about feeling. Closing my eyes always helps.
"Not too much longer, Mrs. Dolores."
She nods her head. Snoring then envelopes the room. I continue to twist the endodontic file.
"Dentists aren't doctors."
Dad's voice echoes in my head.
It's been snowing for two days. I'm closing the office early today, with Mrs. Delores being the last patient. I feel my assistant's gaze piercing through my head. Some teeth are easier than others—some I need to take my time.
Early this morning, I drove to our old church. On the bench outside, the snow covered the seats like fluffy cushions. I watched white feathered crystals blanket the ground while a few bounced in the wind. In a few days, things would be different. A reminder that whatever we bury inside resurfaces.
With teeth shattering, my hands clenched and unclenched. The burning in my fingertips continued. It was a year ago during a similar snowy day. I should pay my respects, but my feet seem planted. In the distance, a redpoll lands on his gravestone. Who said a gravestone is an end to a story?
I remove the rubber dam, and the assistant takes the final X-rays.
"Root canal is completed, Mrs. Delores. Get home safely, and let us know if you need anything."
She smiles and hugs me, reminding me I'm her favorite dentist.
Walking to my office, I whisper, "You must let it go! Everyone, even the dead, deserves a second chance."
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Ali SP
Ali has found a renewed passion for reading and creating. It is now a form of expression for her– another creative outlet which she works to improve upon.
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Congrats on Top Story!🥳
I have had a fear of dentists since one struck me years ago when I was pregnant with my youngest daughter. Sigh.... I am working on this fear, though, as I realize my situation was far from normal never mind unacceptable. Ali, I am so excited to see your work again. Up until recently, I haven't frequented Vocal much, but I have rekindled my spark to create here. I miss your art, which is still splendid, and congratulate you, although late, on top story in January!
This has me thinking. 🤔
Chills at this line, " A reminder that whatever we bury inside resurfaces." SO beautiful.
Argggh - I won't be going to this office, knowing how his mind is wandering🙀
This was great. I have now have a new fear of dentists 😂👏🎊
Admirable work! Keep the great effort—congratulations!
I'm going to be wondering what is going through the head of my dentist next time I'm there. Emotional baggage can be weighty. I hope he feels lightened by the hug. Great artwork too.
Chilling and fun at the same time! Well deserved TS ❣️
Wooohooo!! Congratulations on Top Story!!!
gorgeous work Ali! Very profound!
This is a beautiful story, impeccably written. Congrats on the TS.
An excellent thought-provoking take on the challenge
Very controversial!!!!!😊
Spectacular as always!!! Loving this!!!
Oh, Ali - this is so beautiful. There is so much nuance tightly woven into this short story. I love the theme/meaning at the end and the way the snow on the bench feels like it reflects that idea of fresh starts. Every word here has at least one purpose. Magnificent. 💗 Also, I was so happy to see one of your paintings, again!💓