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I'd like to say this was a dreamy Princess fairy tail, but I'd really be lying. No, this is something a little more dark and tortuous. You see, there is a young woman Cinderella, 18 years old, living with two older sisters and her horribly wretched step-mother Dawn. Cinderella was a kind and simple soul, beautiful dirty blonde locks that grew to her lower back. She was mostly average in size, just as she was in looks.
Tressa RosePublished 9 months ago in CritiqueV for Vendetta
In a dystopian Britain ruled by a police state, Evey is rescued by vigilante V, whose mission is to destroy oppression. V for Vendetta is an imperfect, albeit moving invitation to ignite our own (inner) revolution before it is too late.
Cendrine MarrouatPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueLessons in Chemistry
Lessons in Chemistry is a great book. They should make a movie out of it. It tells a great story about a female chemist in the 1950’s who everyone treats unfairly just because she’s a woman. But really she’s a genius! Extremely well written! I recommend reading it!
Alex H MittelmanPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueThe Lovely Bones
Debut novel, published 21 years after her rape, punishes uncaught killer with death by icicle. Abrupt, unsatisfying twist, narrated by dead little girl: fictional frozen justice?
Judey KalchikPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueCyberpunk 2077 - Night city
The biggest theme of a cyberpunk world in my view has always been the idea of hostile architecture. Night city truly feels evil. From the rubbish that's never collected to the high rise buildings that block the sunlight. Except, of course, where the rich reside and work. The poor abbandoned.
Hywel LatimyrPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueLong Live The Queen - Discussion and critique request
So I have started a story that I do intend to publish after I republish my book Memoirs. But I find during writing it I have hit a wall, and I'd like critique or ideas from fellow creative people.
Hope MartinPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueAre School Uniforms Necessary Or Not?
Are School Uniforms Necessary Or Not? It has long been debated whether school uniforms are really necessary or not. While some say that they are absolutely useless, others say that they are an absolute must in every school. Some reasons they are necessary are that they make sure students don’t get distracted, or bully others. Some reasons they are unneeded are that they are unreasonably expensive, not great quality and sometimes too demanding. In this essay I will be discussing whether I think they are necessary or not.
Aashini RastogiPublished 9 months ago in CritiqueShadows in the Algorithm: An Unveiling of Unfairness in Machine Learning
In the gleaming corridors of our digital age, where algorithms dance and machines learn, there lies a shadow few dare to explore. A shadow cast by the biases and prejudices of a world far from perfect. This is a thrilling journey into the heart of unfairness in machine learning—a realm where ethics and technology intertwine, where justice meets judgment, and where human imperfection is reflected in the code.
julien tatePublished 9 months ago in Critique"Unlocking the Mystery of Human Mastery: A Comedy of Cosmic Ironies"
In the grand stage of existence, humans strut with pride, Believing they're powerful, on life's thrilling ride. Yet within their core, a locked abyss does dwell,
CosmicClipPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueBaltic States put migrants to use and then eject them
It turned out that migrants are no longer welcome in the Baltic States. In 2002, the Ministers of the Council of Europe member states undertook to develop and implement integration policies founded on the principles of human rights, democracy and the rule of law. Being the Council of Europe member states the Baltic countries welcomed thousands of migrants and enthusiastically supported them.
Adomas AbromaitisPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueThe Midnight Society
When I was just thirteen years old, I had the idea for this story. It was full of corruption, espionage, world politics, and maybe just slightly too ambitious for a kid. But I loved writing it. The research for how political power works, types of governments and their function, cold wars and espionage was endlessly fascinating. Crafting plot twist after plot twist, betrayal after betrayal, characters so real I could almost see them sitting before me was what gave me my kick start into writing. It got complicated, and twisted, and I was horrible at keeping up with notes, so I lost the trail of the plot and the enthusiasm to continue it.
Sarah MasseyPublished 10 months ago in CritiqueA YA Story Looking for Input
*** This is basically an excerpt from a YA/Upper Middle grade story looking for critique.*** My main questions would be - from the perspective of a reader of this genre - does the story grab your attention? What needs to be added to make it more interesting? And, of course, if you notice any grammatical errors or clumsy sentences, feel free to point them out also. Add any critiques to the comment section, or PM if you would like it to be kept more quiet.
KJ AartilaPublished 10 months ago in Critique