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I’ve Always Hated the Water
Note: I wrote this for a particular challenge, but I could not find the right conclusion for it, and it seems to be growing into something much bigger and bolder than I thought it could be. Any critiques or thoughts would be helpful...
By Kendall Defoe 3 years ago in Critique
SPOILERS: Taking A Gander At The Future Of Marvel On Film
This is honestly hard for me to say. And because of the subject matter at hand. But because I am here pumping out articles when it really doesn't help much in bringing my existence to stabilization.
By Ad-Libbing With The Z-Man3 years ago in Critique
Beyond Bribery
In the sprawling city of Ethicopia, where the shadows of corruption danced on the walls of corporate skyscrapers, there lived a man named Ethan Noble. Ethan, an ambitious executive, had ascended the corporate ladder at Breakstone Enterprises, a conglomerate with a reputation as shady as the alleyways it operated in. Little did Ethan know that his journey to the top would take an unexpected turn, guiding him from the murky waters of bribery to the luminous shores of ethical leadership.
By Jacob Mhango3 years ago in Critique
The Unyielding Truth
In the heart of Metropolisville, a city renowned for its towering skyscrapers and bustling streets, there existed a peculiar government office known as the Department of Veracity. Despite its grandiose name, the department was infamous for harboring a culture of corruption that ran deeper than the ink in its bureaucrats' pens.
By Jacob Mhango3 years ago in Critique
Shadows Of Justice
In the small, struggling nation of Eloria, where the sun seemed to hesitate before casting its feeble rays upon the worn-out streets, a group of unlikely heroes emerged from the shadows. Eloria was a country burdened by poverty, its people yearning for a glimmer of hope amid the pervasive corruption that had seeped into every layer of government.
By Jacob Mhango3 years ago in Critique
whistleblower's triumph
Once upon a time, in the bustling city of Ethica, there lived a mild-mannered accountant named Oliver Inkwell. Oliver worked for the prestigious firm, Sterling Solutions, where he spent his days crunching numbers and his nights dreaming of spreadsheets. However, little did he know that his meticulous nature would lead him down a path of unexpected adventure and, ultimately, triumph over corruption.
By Jacob Mhango3 years ago in Critique
5 Ways to Enhance Your Oklahoma Stone Patio
A quality patio is an ideal addition to any outdoor living space – especially when it is made with natural Oklahoma stone. The best selections for most patios include limestone, sandstone, and bluestone, which are known for their strength and beauty. These rocks are also very durable, which ensures those qualities stand the test of time.
By richburg stone3 years ago in Critique







