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'This Side of Paradise'
Here is a critique of a classic novel that I just finished about a week ago. The name of the novel is 'This Side of Paradise'. The author is quite famous for a lot of his work. His name is F. Scott Fitzgerald. My idea is to start reading or even re-reading and offering reviews and critiques of my collection of classic novels that I have bought over the years.
By Mark Graham10 months ago in Critique
Not gonna cry
I ain't no crybaby. Except when it comes to elephants. There is some kind of pathos with elephants which means I cry easily where elephants are involved. And my son recently suggested a put down a book which featured on its cover both the word "goodbye" and an image of a dog. He is wise.
By Hannah Moore10 months ago in Critique
Unforgiving- Alien Weaponry
I hate to admit that the first time I heard Unforgiving was in concert. The first time was surreal, as I stood next to my brother, who I nearly lost the previous year. Little did I know a year later, this would be my comfort song when my grandmother passed.
By Atomic Historian10 months ago in Critique
Man In The Box
Man In The Box has always been my favorite Alice In Chains song. Perhaps because I’ve often felt that I’ve been trying to escape the box that people are always trying to paint me into. Most definitely it has something to do with Layne Staley and Jerry Cantrell’s vocal styling.
By Atomic Historian10 months ago in Critique
Unwrapping Barbie: Balancing Beauty, Impact and Imagination in 50 Words
An iconic figure influencing values. Plastic perfection upholds unattainable beauty standards. Barbie Movies: Colorful tales weaving friendship and ambition, but some critics note formulaic plots, provoking discussions about femininity. Cinematic journeys inspire despite debates
By Tereza Giannouri10 months ago in Critique
In the Mix with YouTube
Music mix channels are some of the best parts of YouTube. They keep you company when writing or studying. They’re great for finding new music, without having to dig through tons of other channels, or Spotify. It’s often the best part of my day to put music on and write.
By Atomic Historian10 months ago in Critique
The Power by: Rhonda Byrne
It took a while for me to read it. It did not held my interest. A lot of quotes from famous philosophers, writers, religious leaders, Nobel Prized Winners and Politicians. Power comes from staying positive, love and staying away from negativity that penetrate your positive force field.
By Mariann Carroll10 months ago in Critique
How to waste your life without noticing?
You find a cool dish you want to cook one day. You find a place you want to visit one day. You learn a new skill you might use one day. What about now? You've been scrolling for hours. Forgetting the simple pleasure of unexpected lessons from the outside world.
By Martyna Dearing10 months ago in Critique