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Mercury Boys A Novel
Mercury Boys A Novel written by Chandro Prasad is a young adult novel of girl named Saskia and her search for a perfect boyfriend, but she learns many lessons in this search. The author would like teens who read this book to learn more about themselves as they grow into adulthood and the choices that they make and trying to understand what makes all of us tick.
By Mark Graham10 months ago in Critique
Beth Legacy of Love
Beth Legacy of Love is a novel written by Jeffery Young it is about Beth, a high school senior who just wants to do the right things and make the proper decisions that she and her friends need to make. This is a book that would make a good book discussion group to discuss how and why gossip affects us all in many ways and to discuss how health and illness is handled by friends.
By Mark Graham10 months ago in Critique
Kyle's Little Sister
Kyle's Little Sister written and illustrated by BonHyung Jeong is a middle school level book that is based on a television show. It is a graphic novel about how Kyle's little sister fits in with her new school surroundings. This could be a good story to share if siblings go to the same school. There are plenty of lessons that readers can learn in how to make friends the right and wrong ways, but kids need to learn.
By Mark Graham10 months ago in Critique
Bayou Whispers
Bayou Whispers written by R.B. Wood is a story based in Louisiana that has many secrets. Jeannie LaRue and friends will learn what family history is all about and how it affects the present. This story is a somewhat fast read and you will get the feeling that you are in Louisiana.
By Mark Graham10 months ago in Critique
Unmitigated Greed
Chapter 8 Frank spent the next ten days negotiating for the purchase of Border-to-Border Charter Bus Company. He spent the evenings with Marisol. What stood out to him as he crisscrossed the border every day was how much both cities had changed. Laredo was no longer a frontier border town with dirt streets and run-down neighborhoods. Large warehouses dotted the landscape, and the people appeared more prosperous than when he lived there.
By Mark Gagnon10 months ago in Critique
Goods and Effects
Goods and Effects by Al Schnupp is a historical fiction novel that shows the reader what survival is all about. It is also a novel that deals with racism and discrimination affected how one lived day to day and overcome obstactles. This is a novel that will make you think that you are there in the story and experiencing the events with the characters.
By Mark Graham10 months ago in Critique
Violets Are Blue
Violets Are Blue is a novel by Barbara Dee that is about a young girl named Wren and how she copes with everything that is going on in her life, and she uses her special talent to do this. This is a young adult novel that is a fast read and one can learn various coping skills that will work for us.
By Mark Graham10 months ago in Critique
The Tale of Two Cities
A Tale of Two Cities by Charles Dickens is a piece of English literature that we have all read at some time. This is a story that takes place during the time of the French Revolution and the use of the guillotine. This is a story of opposites and right and wrong. The characters stand out and one can feel the emotion of the story in a quite detailed novel.
By Mark Graham10 months ago in Critique
Marky the Magnificent Fairy
Marky the Magnificent Fairy is a children's picture about a small fairy who is special in many ways. This is a story about diversity and inclusion in society. Marky may not be able to fly but she has many other talents to choose from to help her fit in society.
By Mark Graham10 months ago in Critique
How to Critique a Blog Post
A blog critique is a written evaluation of a blog post. It can be used to improve the writing, content, or design of the blog post. When critiquing a blog post, it is important to be constructive and specific. The goal is to help the author improve their blog post, not to tear it down.
By Timothy A Rowland10 months ago in Critique
Compact Cooling Revolution: The Rise and Relevance of Mini Fridges in Modern Living
In today's age of urban living and shrinking spaces, the quest for efficiency and smart utilization has never been more critical. As the line between office, home, and leisure spaces blurs, the desire for products that can seamlessly fit into multiple aspects of our lives has skyrocketed. Enter the mini fridge: a compact marvel that, over the years, has transitioned from a humble dormitory accessory to an essential multi-functional appliance.
By samuel mulatu10 months ago in Critique
Don't Blame Me
A book that changed me......not from the reading aspect, (Many have done that.) but from the writing aspect. I am a beginner! I tackled a huge story! One I was nowhere near qualified to take on as a debut. But I like a challenge. Sometimes I fail at it, sometimes I succeed. No matter the outcome, the challenge alone teaches. Writing this tale not only challenged me but changed me!
By Diana K Robinson10 months ago in Critique