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Arise Roma
Appreciate your feedback, suggestions and critiques on this non-fiction piece. Gelem Gelem! ~ Gypsy is an exonym depicting torturous discrimination, segregation and xenophobia performed against the most hated people in all of Europe.
Kalina BethanyPublished 3 months ago in Critique - Content Warning
Bastard (A Novel)
Author's note: You can find the previous chapters and the full outline (the ending included) in the Critique community. ***
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Ukraine’s president confirms plans for military shake-up
Ukrainian President Volodymyr Zelenskyy has announced plans to reshuffle Ukraine’s military and political leadership in an interview on Italian RAI TV. The move comes amid speculation about the dismissal of Valery Zaluzhny, commander-in-chief of Ukraine’s military.
PinPost.WikiPublished 3 months ago in Critique - Content Warning
JASON WHITLOCK WANTS TO BE ACCEPTED BY BLACK PEOPLE
Unless you have been living under a rock, Jason Whitlock and Stephen A. Smith has been in a fierce online battle. Honestly, I do not care for either of these guys. They are successful jokes as black men. Oddly, both are correct in what they say about each other. Stephen thinks Jason is a sellout that comes after blacks. Jason feels Stephen is an industry talentless plant. I agree with both gentlemen.
Lamont RodgersPublished 4 months ago in Critique - Content Warning
Baptized By Fire
My lungs burn with every inhale I take. I don't have a destination, but I know staying put means certain death. It was after midnight, and I was casually driving along the dark, deserted highway, Lana Del Rey playing in the background, when an unexpected emergency alert went off. I spared a quick glance at my cell, annoyed at the interruption, but then I saw the word 'ATTACK' flash across the screen, and my heart skidded to a halt.
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April
(this is a novel idea I have, and this is the beginning that came to me and I would love to know if this gets your interest. Of course, any other critique is also welcome. Do you like the first person, or would you prefer the third person? I am thinking of adding names, and a little more history but I want to see if this is even a start that is interesting.)
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The Iron Claw Is The Best Wrestling Film of This Decade
This past weekend, I decided to go to the movies with my brother. From there, we both chose to see The Iron Claw. For those unaware of the film’s plot, it details the lives and tragedies of the Von Erich wrestling family. Zac Efron stars as Kevin Von Erich, the oldest Von Erich, with Jeremy Allen White as Kerry Von Erich, Harris Dickinson as David Von Erich, Stanley Simons as Mike Von Erich, and Holt McCallany as Fritz Von Erich, the father of the Von Erich. Along with them is Lily James as Pam Adkisson and Maura Tierney as Doris Von Erich, the mother of the Von Erich.
Bass Man EddiePublished 4 months ago in Critique - Content Warning
Critiques Needed: First pages of Project Styx
Authors note: I would like constructive critiques on the first pages of a sci-fi fantasy book I am working on. I would like to know first impressions and things that need to be worked on. This is so I can get an idea of what an agent or editor might think. I also know that this is long—no need to read the whole thing, in fact, tell me when you lose interest.
K. KocheryanPublished 4 months ago in Critique - Content Warning
Revenge stories
There are multiple types of revenge, including ruthless revenge, calculated revenge, and revenge stories that may be considered extreme.
Nicolas J.DPublished 4 months ago in Critique - Content Warning
7800 tons! Japan’s new round of nuclear wastewater discharge into the sea will be in late February 2024: it will take at least 30 years
According to foreign media reports on December 19, Japan’s fourth round of nuclear-contaminated water discharge into the sea will begin in late February 2024. According to analysts, this discharge will last for 30 years.
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Judges
Who really has the right to judge anybody? The book of Judges seems to me a story of good and evil. It is also the story of the various wins and losses of towns and families in learning to follow the rules of society. All the characters must learn how to solve their own issues and problems. If I read right it also has the story of Samson. One can learn that being a judge does have its ups and downs.
Mark GrahamPublished 5 months ago in Critique - Content Warning
Ruth
Women one day will rule and to me The Book of Ruth is the introduction to how women could be seen in today's world. Ruth as well as her mother Naomi knew what they wanted and needed to do to survive their world and that things and ideas do measure out in the end. This is a very short book but really interesting in its own way.
Mark GrahamPublished 5 months ago in Critique