Character Development

A Game of Thrones: A Critique
The "Game of Thrones" TV show series captivated audiences with its intricate politics and fantasy world, but its rushed final season disappointed fans who craved satisfying character arcs. The swift resolution of long-standing conflicts overshadowed the series' rich storytelling, leaving viewers wanting more coherence and depth in the concluding episodes.
By Emily Hart3 years ago in Critique
The Shining
A cleverly thought-out film with hidden messages and gritty undertone, The Shining remains a true classic. From the mind of Stephen King, Stanley Kubrick's genius produced a timeless work of art. Speaking for every writer, I'm sure we've all been consumed by our work, slowly losing our grip on reality.
By Sian N. Clutton3 years ago in Critique
ACOTAR
Centuries-old High Fae Lords falling in love with a 19yr old human who all swear like their "cool high schoolers." Abusive relationships, but Rhysand's actions get conveniently explained away while Tamlin is unfairly villainized.
By Sarah Glass3 years ago in Critique
The Critic
Damien Brisbane was the star in his world of making or breaking restaurants. Yes, he was the dreaded food critic. One of the worlds most feared creatures. He lurks, he lunges, he tastes, and he kills, he then moves on and kills some more. If you want your restaurant to be catapulted into success, everything down to the toothpicks better be in pristine condition when he arrives.
By Haseeb3 years ago in Critique
2024 Snow White
Not out yet, but let’s talk! Andrew Burnap’s character will not be a prince. No prince? Couldn’t Disney at least put one that helps grow Snow White as a character? What about someone they expect her to marry but chooses different like Beauty and the Beast? How will this go?
By Seashell Harpspring 3 years ago in Critique
Jellystone, err... "Yellowstone"
Despite its nonsensical timeline, episodes follow the same pacing as Baywatch, but in Montana, so the beachy, butt-centric music video montages have been replaced by cattle-wrangling and rodeo routine music video montages. Also, no one plays a sympathetic character and everyone is a villain—except for Jimmy, the former meth cook.
By Philip Canterbury3 years ago in Critique
Long Live The Queen - Discussion and critique request
So I have started a story that I do intend to publish after I republish my book Memoirs. But I find during writing it I have hit a wall, and I'd like critique or ideas from fellow creative people.
By Hope Martin3 years ago in Critique
Unleashing the Extraordinary within Ordinary
In the heart of a bustling city, where skyscrapers reached for the sky and neon lights painted the night with vibrant hues, lived a young woman named Lily. At first glance, Lily appeared to be like any other person, blending seamlessly into the urban landscape. However, beneath her unassuming exterior lay a remarkable gift that had the power to change lives.
By ADEDAN3 years ago in Critique
~Hercules Ring~ Additional story information! Free for people to critique!
~Hercules Ring~ *Background details of Hercules story and the information that changed his life forever and made him into the strong man and hero with a desire to be good and help others have good lives to live free of suffering or at least able to bare it! I'm looking for ideas, and suggestions on when and where to write in the details and information that is needed for the larger story to come together better and make sense as a whole! This is not an easy project to write so anyone with ideas or experience in exploring mythical history of such a nature (including Hercules history) are welcome to provide material or direction that will help improve the story and make it that much more better! And here is the link to the original submitted first chapter to my work. https://vocal.media/fiction/hercules-ring I'm waiting for contest results before I can re-submit the whole body of new work to the new Chapters group!*
By Jennifer Cooley3 years ago in Critique
"Unlocking the Mystery of Human Mastery: A Comedy of Cosmic Ironies"
In the grand stage of existence, humans strut with pride, Believing they're powerful, on life's thrilling ride. Yet within their core, a locked abyss does dwell,
By CosmicClip3 years ago in Critique
Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs.
One day Snow White a very special little girl with a rather controlling mother in law, who despised her, as she desired all Snow Whites fathers love and affection for herself. preceeds to send her into the woods to collect daffodils.
By Dawn Earnshaw3 years ago in Critique
Work
Consider yourself a "lazy" person but still want to start working from home, don't worry! There are steps you can take to overcome laziness and create a successful work-from-home routine. Here's how you can get started:
By Ilya KozinetS3 years ago in Critique