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Being on Top its not what gives You happiness

Being on Top ! lasts a minute or a second for some !

By DarkosPublished 11 months ago 2 min read
digital art by me 2017 Trimendology in action

Sometimes it takes one minute or even two. Sometimes it takes years or months to finally find the right spot amidst the criticism of others about you. And how does it actually devalue the worth of everything that we do?

Aren't things meant to be naturally and humanly crafted and created as guidance, like a map for our everyday existence and life?

Or would you rather be part of this rat race, suppressing the natural biological processes of your nervous system again and again?

Does that make any sense?

Yes, this world seems like a marketing pit where literature and poems have turned into the number one of some kind of a competetive terror and its realm in life.

Will it help if somebody places them at the top? I don't think so. It lacks meaning and care for your own being and others.

When someone supposes to crush on what is for them it happens purely by the law of God's will and the universe.

Competitions are healthy if you can approach them as fun, as something that inspires or challenges you to discover something new.

And in those terms, they are okay. However, creating a blend of disconnected emotions or conflicts within a person, that's not joy; it's a different kind of an internal terror!

The same applies to critics of poems or someone's words. Some communities allow it openly, but do you really need it all?

Some people have a different way of being and healing through various methods. The ultimate essence of the text's words is what one experiences. It's like encountering another human's world that truly matters – whether to connect or not.

What holds more significance? When we read, we engage with the work separately from the author's words. But who matters more – the human who created it or the creation itself? All life observations, experiences, and some kind of life mission to restore health and joy through writing are important. That's a fact!

However, who is creating it? A living human! Thus, their art is not more important than their life. The essence lies within the being. That's where you should always start, before these storms sweep you away from yourself and bring tears to your face, because that's truly not worth it.

If you are in good health, joy, and happiness throughout a day, whether with others or alone, it's a wonderful way.

Relax and follow your heart. Maybe there's hidden guidance in everything you read and write.

Perhaps you're here for somebody else, and writing is merely a language to connect and explore the world from new perspectives and new hidden self.

In this way, both the author and their poems or writing find themselves in a secure place.

So relax and embrace the freedom it brings!

Follow God's will, and you will discover inner peace and joy in writing it all over again and in life which is everything You really do get being alive!

Poetry

About the Creator

Darkos

Human : painter, digital art maker, sound composer, poet, writer, qigong healer & trainer

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  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Brilliant!!! Love this line"In this way, both the author and their poems or writing find themselves in a secure place." Love this!!!💕❤️❤️

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