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Criminal Story 1

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By A S DawoodPublished about a year ago 3 min read
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Detective Sarah Jones was feeling restless. She had been stuck in her office all day, going over files and trying to piece together the evidence in the latest case she had been assigned. It was a murder, one of the most brutal she had ever seen. The victim was a young woman, found strangled and left in an alleyway. Sarah had seen plenty of violence in her time as a detective, but something about this case just didn't sit right with her.

She decided to take a break and go for a walk around the city. As she walked, she couldn't help but think about the case. The victim's name was Emma, and she was only 23 years old. She had been a college student, studying to be a nurse. Sarah wondered who could have done this to her, and why. As she passed by a coffee shop, she noticed a man sitting at a table, staring at her. She didn't recognize him, but something about him made her uneasy. She kept walking, but couldn't shake the feeling that he was following her.

Later that day, Sarah received a call from her partner, Detective Tom Stevens. He had some news about the case. "We found a witness," he said. "A guy who saw the victim with a man the night she was killed. He didn't get a good look at the guy's face, but he said he was wearing a black hoodie."

Sarah felt a glimmer of hope. Maybe they were getting somewhere with the case. She asked Tom to send her the witness's statement, and he agreed to meet her at the station to go over it together.

As Sarah was driving to the station, she noticed the same man from the coffee shop following her. She tried to lose him, but he seemed determined to keep up. She pulled into the parking lot at the station and got out of her car, ready to confront him. But as she turned around, she was hit from behind and knocked unconscious.

When Sarah woke up, she was tied to a chair in a dark room. She couldn't see anything, but she could hear the sound of someone breathing heavily. She tried to call out, but a hand covered her mouth. "Shh," a voice whispered. "Don't make a sound."

Sarah's heart was pounding. She had no idea who had abducted her, or why. The room was completely silent except for the sound of the person's breathing. She tried to calm herself down and think of a way out. But before she could even begin to come up with a plan, the door opened and a figure entered the room.

The figure was wearing a black hoodie, just like the witness had described. Sarah couldn't see his face, but she could tell he was a man. He walked over to her and leaned in close. "You've been asking too many questions," he said. "It's time to shut you up for good."

Sarah's heart was racing. She knew she had to act fast if she was going to survive. She struggled against the ropes that bound her, but they were too tight. The man reached into his pocket and pulled out a knife. Sarah braced herself for the worst.

Just then, the door burst open and Tom and several other officers stormed into the room. They apprehended the man and untied Sarah. She was shaken but relieved to be alive.

Later, in the safety of her own home, Sarah reviewed the evidence in the case. She realized that the man who had abducted her was the killer all along. He had been following her, trying to make sure she didn't uncover his tracks. But he had underestimated her determination and her resourcefulness.

Thanks to her quick thinking and the bravery of her fellow officers, justice had been served.

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