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Farewell dear brother

Prologue: Run with the Pack

By Raymond G. TaylorPublished 7 months ago Updated 4 months ago 4 min read
Wolf howling on glacial erratic at Little America Flats: NPS / Jim Peaco, 2004

He had grown thin. Last in the order of feeding, last even after the pups. With food in such short supply, as it was that bleak winter, the family had none to spare for so sickly a son. He had burrowed himself into the soft earth, refusing to carry on.

I recall how my brother had been injured by a deer that had kicked him in the shoulder, breaking bones, making it hard for him to keep up. With this impediment, he had declined in status. With such loss of place, he was unable to claim enough of the family food to sustain himself. He had become little more than a frame of bones, covered in a loose and ragged coat of mottled gray.

As the pack moved on, each of us embraced our beloved, one last time. Nuzzling, lapping, laying heads on backs, and touching face to face.

He was the last of my siblings. We had been a litter of many pups together, but each save he and I had been taken by the forest. Now, only I would remain. No longer many, just one. I alone would be here as the last of the brothers and sisters. The others lost to the forest forever.

As the family trouped off, leaving our own flesh and blood to die with final, unseen dignity, we hung our heads. Then raising them, we howled a last song to our kin. A requiem, stirring in full lupine voice, beginning at a low sorrowful timbre, rising to a crescendo, a momentous wall of sound, alerting the whole forest, the whole world to our grief. Even the unmovable trees were stirred into sadness at the passing of this once magnificent beast.

From the distant forest other voices joined us in our sorrow.

“We hear you brothers, we grieve with you sisters, we mourn with you the passing of a great hunter.”

The songs continued throughout the night. A thousand voices raised, the forest orchestra striking up its nocturne. As it finished, I sang my own last lament.

“Farewell, my brother. Sleep in the arms of the Forest.”

“Go in peace, brother,” was the barely audible reply. “No longer shall we run and hunt and play together. Think of me no more. I see a hunting path, and it stretches off into the far beyond. Farewell dear brother.

“Run free! Run with the pack!”

~ O ~ 0 ~ o ~

From the author

This little story of lupine love and loss is the prologue to my first novel: Run with the Pack. The book is currently available in Kindle and paperback and you can read the complete book here, chapter by chapter.

Read: Run with the Pack: Chapter 1 NOW!

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About the Creator

Raymond G. Taylor

Author based in Kent, England. A writer of fictional short stories in a wide range of genres, he has been a non-fiction writer since the 1980s. Non-fiction subjects include art, history, technology, business, law, and the human condition.

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  • Mark Graham6 months ago

    Loved the prologue as well as Chapters One and Two. Pictures are fantastic.

  • Lacy Loar-Gruenler7 months ago

    Raymond, I love stories that anthropomorphize animals because it makes me feel an even closer connection to them. You did a fantastic job here!!! Thanks for offering this chapter.

  • That was so emotional! I would love to read more if you don't mind posting here!

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