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Bloody Mary

The Haunting of Grey Haven

By Z.a.i.n.t.zPublished 21 days ago 5 min read
Bloody Mary - Turns fear into fun

Chapter 1: The Legend of Bloody Mary

In the desolate town of Grey Haven, where the sun never pierced the perpetual red clouds, a dark legend loomed over its residents. Grey Haven was a place where color was a distant memory, and everything existed in shades of grey. The town's eerie ambiance was the perfect setting for the tale of Bloody Mary—a name that sent shivers down the spines of those who dared to speak it.

Mary Talbot was once a beautiful young woman, full of life and dreams. She lived during a time when Grey Haven was vibrant, with lush green fields and clear blue skies. However, her life took a tragic turn when she was falsely accused of witchcraft. In a fit of hysteria and paranoia, the townspeople dragged her to the edge of the forest and burned her at the stake. As the flames consumed her, she cursed the town and its inhabitants, vowing to return and exact her revenge.

Chapter 2: The Curse Unleashed

Decades passed, and the memory of Mary Talbot faded into a ghost story told to frighten children. But Grey Haven changed. The skies turned crimson, the land became barren, and the vibrant colors drained away. People whispered that Mary’s curse had taken hold, and her vengeful spirit roamed the town.

In the heart of Grey Haven, stood the old Talbot mansion, now abandoned and decrepit. It was said that Mary’s spirit resided there, waiting for those foolish enough to summon her. The ritual to call Bloody Mary was simple yet terrifying—stand in front of a mirror with a single candle, chant her name three times, and she would appear.

Chapter 3: The Dare

On a cold, moonless night, a group of teenagers, driven by curiosity and a desire for thrill, decided to test the legend. Among them were Jack, the fearless leader; Sarah, the skeptic; Mark, the prankster; and Emily, the quiet observer. They gathered at the old mansion, their flashlights flickering in the darkness.

The mansion was a labyrinth of decaying rooms and cobweb-filled corridors. The air was thick with dust, and the silence was oppressive. They made their way to a room with an old, cracked mirror, and Jack set up the candle. The flame cast eerie shadows on the walls, and a chill ran down their spines as they began the ritual.

"Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary, Bloody Mary," they chanted in unison.

At first, nothing happened. They laughed nervously, mocking the old legend. But then, the temperature in the room plummeted, and the candle flickered violently. The air grew heavy, and a sense of dread washed over them. In the mirror, a figure began to take shape—a woman with long, dark hair and hollow, blood-red eyes. Her face was twisted in rage, and as she appeared, all the crosses of Christ on the walls turned upside down.

Chapter 4: The Haunting Begins

Panic set in as the apparition of Bloody Mary reached out from the mirror. The room filled with a cacophony of whispers and screams, and the teenagers scrambled to escape. The doors slammed shut, trapping them inside. The walls seemed to close in, and the air was filled with a metallic, coppery smell of blood.

Jack tried to force the door open, but it wouldn’t budge. Mark, ever the prankster, was now pale with fear. Sarah, the skeptic, was paralyzed, unable to comprehend what she was seeing. Emily, sensing a malevolent presence, backed away from the mirror, her eyes wide with terror.

Bloody Mary stepped out of the mirror, her presence overwhelming. She moved with an unnatural grace, her eyes fixed on the intruders. She spoke in a voice that echoed with pain and anger, recounting her death and the curse she had placed on the town. The room seemed to warp around her, the shadows growing darker and the air colder.

Chapter 5: The Escape

Desperation fueled their efforts to escape. Jack, with a surge of adrenaline, managed to break a window, and they all scrambled out, cutting themselves on the broken glass. They ran through the desolate streets of Grey Haven, the figure of Bloody Mary following them, her rage palpable.

They sought refuge in the town’s church, hoping the sacred ground would protect them. The church, once a place of solace, was now as grey and lifeless as the rest of Grey Haven. The pews were dusty, and the stained-glass windows were darkened with grime. They huddled together, praying for the nightmare to end.

But Bloody Mary was relentless. The candles in the church flickered, and the air grew cold. The crosses turned upside down once more, and the doors slammed shut. Mary appeared before them, her eyes burning with hatred. She was unstoppable, her curse too powerful to break.

Chapter 6: The Final Stand

Realizing that they couldn’t outrun her, Jack decided to confront Bloody Mary. He stepped forward, his heart pounding, and spoke to her, appealing to her humanity. He apologized for the wrongs done to her and begged for her forgiveness.

For a moment, Mary’s expression softened, and the room grew still. But the pain and anger that fueled her vengeance were too great. She raised her hand, and the room erupted in chaos. The walls bled, the air filled with screams, and shadows danced menacingly.

In a last-ditch effort, Emily, the quiet observer, remembered an old tale her grandmother had told her about breaking curses. She grabbed a piece of chalk and drew a circle around them, chanting an ancient incantation. The air crackled with energy, and Mary’s form wavered.

With a final, heart-wrenching scream, Bloody Mary vanished, leaving the room in silence. The curse was lifted, and the oppressive atmosphere of Grey Haven began to lift. Color slowly returned to the town, and the red clouds dissipated, revealing a pale sun.

Chapter 7: The Aftermath

The ordeal left its mark on the survivors. They were haunted by the memories of that night, but they also felt a strange sense of peace. The town of Grey Haven began to heal, its residents slowly returning to their normal lives. The legend of Bloody Mary became a cautionary tale, a reminder of the power of fear and the consequences of injustice.

Jack, Sarah, Mark, and Emily grew closer, bonded by their shared experience. They vowed to keep the story of Bloody Mary alive, not as a ghost story, but as a testament to the resilience of the human spirit. Grey Haven would never be the same, but it had been given a second chance, a chance to remember and to heal.

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  • Mark Graham21 days ago

    What a great book. Your one phrase reminded me of Candyman, Candyman, Candyman.

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