“Come, come, Elispa, my darling, don’t fret. Everything will be quite all right, I promise you this.”
Elispa embraced the arms of her sister, Asura, which were wrapped around her thin shoulders for comfort, and gazed into her beloved sea. Elipsa sighed, seeing that the starfish and sea anemones were already beginning their transformation into those lovely, fluttering things of the sky. What were they called? Oh, yes - butterflies - of course, she remembered now. Oh dear, she thought. With the hand that wasn’t desperately grasping her sister’s, Elipsa wiped a translucent, aquamarine-colored tear from her eye. Was this really goodbye?
“Oh, Asura, I’m not sure I can do this, dear sister,” she managed to choke out, “just look at the corals, my children - how they fight so fiercely to come back - to be alive again. I’m their mother. They still need me here, I just know it.”
The two sirens swayed in the rock and pull of the tide. Cyan and indigo waters tousled and swept up their long, cinnabar hair - two amber flames reaching out toward the sun and foreshadowing their fate.
Asura lovingly stroked the cheek of Elipsa. She, too, watched as the jellies and anemones began to grow wings, but stopped abruptly, taking notice of the tears in Elipsa’s crystalline eyes.
“There, there, dear sister, please - don’t cry anymore for the sea. The water is more powerful now, don’t you agree? Please, we must choose to look at it that way. The angels above the maritime world need us now. Come, quickly - it’s time! We must go now, my dear.” She returned to luring Elipsa upward with small, gentle pulls, but the distressed sea maiden would not budge.
"Are there truly wings waiting for us up there, as they say?” Elipsa asked.
“Yes, of course, I don’t believe for a minute that they would deceive us, sweet girl. Come!”
Elipsa hesitated still, unable to take her eyes off of the seabed and the winsome, familiar waters that surrounded her. The sea was her home. The ocean and its creatures - her sons and daughters - were the only things that she knew. Of course, many of her children were already gone now. Thousands had since perished, and the ones who’d embraced their new wings had flown off into the clouds far above.
However, it wasn’t either of those that she worried for. Though she mourned for her fallen children and also grieved for those who had fluttered away, she found herself profusely troubled over her young that remained, stubbornly, in the waters.
“The coral bed, my sweet children,” she whispered again. However, the ravenous swells of the sea came and whisked her words away with a keen and fervid swiftness.
It was true that the ocean had grown exceptionally powerful. The humans were now gone, for years of their neglect toward the Earth and her elements had made sure of that. Everything they’d predicted was true. The glaciers and ice caps had melted, and the seas had grown so high they'd swallowed the land - the tops of their waves now kissing the warm breath of the sun. The sky was waiting for them. All Elipsa had to do was let go of her world and the wings would be hers. The heavens were asking for angels - the oceans were strong and no longer needed their mothers.
"Don't you mourn for your children, Asura?"
"Of course I do, sweet sister. But the seraphs have assured me that they now all reside in the heavens - that they can be seen and visited in their new home amongst the stars."
More tears flowed from Elipsa's lazuline eyes. As they did, the salt that made up her body began to disintegrate into the currents and waves. She took in a big, deep breath of the billowing water, which had grown unnaturally warm. The effects of climate change surged through her seafaring spirit and quintessence, and she felt herself become more and more fragile.
"That's it," whispered Asura, "it's time to let go."
Elipsa took a final breath of the water, then allowed her sister to pull her into the welcoming air. As they rose to the clouds and became part of the heavens, many of Elipsa's remaining children followed her: a cavalcade of angelfish, otters, and oysters shadowing her lead. However, some of them remained.
In the years following the perish of the humans and the surge of the seas, it is said that Elipsa still visits the powerful, tempestuous seas in search of her missing children: falling from the clouds and rising back up again - in the cycle of water, rain, and sky.
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Gina C.
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Comments (20)
This is lovely, but also sad.
well done sister you so much sweet lovely work , please don't stop keep going
really amazing !
Oh wow! The ending was so powerful. You have a very unique style that sets you apart don’t ever lose that
Beautiful, surreal, practically an original fable! Absolutely well done!
As always, a fantastic piece. Your versatility is incredible.
Lovely take on the painting, great story
My goodness Gina! This is soooo gorgeous! WOW! It is one of the most beautiful things that I have ever read! It is simply stunning! BRAVO my friend BRAVO!
Gorgeous lyrical writing, Gina!
Beautiful imagery Gina! Well done.
Masterfully written! I loved it.
This is just gorgeous. Well done, my friend.
Awww, poor Elipsa 🥺 She is so loving and has such a hard time letting go. Loved your story so much!
One reign ends, another reign begins--& whatever follows has a new mythology for the rain itself.
As always, your words are pure whimsy and magic. I can't get over how amazingly you write. So so well done on this! "The heavens were asking for angels - the oceans were strong and no longer needed their mothers." This line was too beautiful for me not to point out. How creative, to envision a world where there is only heavens and sea, no land, to see the creatures of one transcend to the next in such a seamless manner. It's a gorgeous world you've created in this one, Gina. Absolutely magical and spellbinding. Wow.
The language you used here is a spell of its own, the realism of a ruined planet combined with the desperation of lost loves make this feel like a Greek fable. Definitely could use this to springboard into an interesting, compelling novella. Great work Gina!
You could definitely keep this one going. What a sad but wonderfully creative idea!! I loved how easily you made this story feel so connected to the artwork. And these lines were just perfection: 'The two sirens swayed in the rock and pull of the tide. Cyan and indigo waters tousled and swept up their long, cinnabar hair - two amber flames reaching out toward the sun and foreshadowing their fate.' Another fantastic entry!!
❤️ I wanna see where this is going!! 😁
That’s a gorgeous painting, The story is so captivating. I can’t wait for part 2 💓🎉
Great interpretations of the painting Gina. We will wait for your completed version. Good Luck. 👍