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love is suffocating...the poem

is it not lovely?

By BlissPublished about a year ago 3 min read

In a world consumed by passion's flame,

A tale unfolds of love's suffocating game.

Two souls entwined in a web so tight,

Struggling for breath in this stifling night.

Once, their love burned bright as the sun,

A fervent embrace, a dance begun.

But shadows crept upon their hearts,

The air grew heavy with unspoken words,

Promises tangled, their voices unheard.

A delicate balance, so fragile, so thin,

Love's sweet oxygen replaced by chagrin.

Like tendrils of smoke, it smothered their dreams,

Choking their hopes with silent screams.

The fire that once warmed their souls,

Now seared and scorched, leaving gaping holes.

Bound by the weight of expectations unmet,

Their love waned, a faded silhouette.

Each gasp for freedom met with resistance,

Love's grip, relentless in its persistence.

They yearned for solace, for a breath of relief,

To mend their hearts, to find belief.

But love, a paradox, both tender and cruel,

Constrained their spirits, like a ship in a duel.

Yet amidst the darkness, a flicker remains,

A glimmer of hope, breaking love's chains.

For love, though fierce, has a way to mend,

To transform, to heal, to help hearts ascend.

With courage, they must face their fears,

Release the pain that's built up through years.

Breathe in the air of newfound grace,

And rediscover love's gentle embrace.

In this suffocating dance, love's true test,

They may find solace, they may find rest.

For love, if given the chance to breathe,

Can heal the wounds, its magic retrieve.

So let us remember, when love grows cold,

To nurture the flames, let love unfold.

For in the depths of suffocating despair,

Love's sweet oxygen can make us repair.

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In love's embrace, a suffocating grip,

A tempestuous bond, a sinking ship.

The air grows thin, the walls draw near,

A love once vibrant, now veiled in fear.

Passion's flame burns with an intense heat,

Yet, beneath the surface, doubts secrete.

Embraced too tightly, hearts start to choke,

As whispers of love become a cruel joke.

The tendrils of affection, they intertwine,

Binding two souls in a twisted design.

But as they cling, they lose their breath,

Gasping for freedom, for life, for death.

In this toxic tangle, emotions collide,

Suffocating the love they once took in stride.

Each word a weapon, each touch a vice,

Love's delicate petals crushed under the ice.

Yet hope still flickers amidst the despair,

A glimmer of light in the suffocating air.

Love, if it's true, can learn to breathe,

To set hearts free, to grant reprieve.

Break free from the chains that constrict,

Find solace in the depths, where hearts connect.

Breathe in forgiveness, exhale the pain,

Release the grip of suffocating disdain.

For love, when nurtured with tenderness and care,

Can transcend suffocation, can breathe in the air.

Rekindling flames with a gentle touch,

Reviving the love that means so much.

Let go of the fear, let go of the strain,

Discover the love that's meant to remain.

In the vast expanse where freedom lies,

Love breathes anew, beneath the skies.

With courage, they must face their fears,

Release the pain that's built up through years.

Breathe in the air of newfound grace,

And rediscover love's gentle embrace.

In this suffocating dance, love's true test,

They may find solace, they may find rest.

For love, if given the chance to breathe,

Can heal the wounds, its magic retrieve.

Let go of the fear, let go of the strain,

Discover the love that's meant to remain.

In the vast expanse where freedom lies,

Love breathes anew, beneath the skies.

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Bliss

Unlocking the power of words, I am a versatile wordsmith who crafts captivating narratives and ignites the spark of imagination.

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