The Aquarium Challenge Winners

An inside look into the Vocal Curation Team's favorite stories from The Aquarium Challenge

By Vocal Curation TeamPublished 2 months ago 3 min read
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We never have to look far for unexpected interpretations of our prompts, and this Challenge was no different. A simple sentence- "Write a story about an aquarium" - gave us a kaleidoscope of stories. There were aquaria in space, humans in aquaria, animals escaping their glass enclosures and others finding comfort within the glass. There was glass that cracked and glass that could not be broken, to say nothing of the characters’ hearts and emotions- fragile, intricate, hardened, broken. Some Creators lamented the aquarium while others celebrated its beauty.

Whether the story was conventional in its telling or shocking in its plot, we looked deeply at each one to find those that elevated the prompt from fun and engaging to vibrant and emotionally resonant. As always, we found many that did just that.

Here are the winners of The Aquarium Challenge along with a few honorable mentions.

$1,000 Grand Prize Winner

Lorelle R for Middle School Mafia

But the funny thing is, as long as he’s in there, no one’s afraid of him.

Middle School Mafia is a story about a few middle schoolers who like to hang out in an aquarium. Oh, and they conduct all of the business of a middle school mafia there, too. And why do they like to hang out in an aquarium? It’s dark, it’s crowded, and no one pays attention to middle school kids there. They blend in with the crowds of children, the perfect place to conduct high-level hijinx.

This simple and silly (brilliant) premise had us in stitches. Humor is one of the most difficult forms of writing. Think about it- how often do you as a reader laugh out loud? There’s something about timing and creating the unexpected on the page that is especially difficult. But Lorelle R has done just that. This story is zany and emotional, unexpected and fun. Lorelle found pathos in the shadows of the aquarium, giving weight to an absurd but touching situation, a bully being foiled by pictures of his good deeds. Such a simple premise, but, when set among sharks, the comedy abounds. Congratulations, Lorelle R!

$250 Second Place Winner

C. Stachow for Saltwater

…murky waves cascade down the stairs toward us.

C. Stachow made us sweat. From the very first line, we felt the tension of Saltwater. Tension is what keeps a reader scrolling down their screen. It’s what pushes a story forward and raises our temperature. In Saltwater, we get an aquarium under siege. At first we are told there’s some sort of breach, families running for their cars. But there’s fire and water, broken glass. It’s more like a warzone than an aquarium. What could possibly happen at an aquarium to cause such mayhem? And then C. Stachow raises the stakes, creating even more tension, more grueling possibility. There are hostages. There’s been an explosion. Things have escaped.

When problems multiply in a story, it’s often difficult to keep them grounded, to keep the narrative in control. The more problems there are, the quicker a story can go off the rails. This is one reason why readers don’t enjoy a deus ex machina, a sudden and contrived solution to a problem. As readers we like reality, plausibility, possibility, and that’s exactly what we got from this harrowing tale. Congratulations, C. Stachow!

Honorable Mention

Jay Mckenzie for Aquaria Humanis

It occurs to me then that they’re flirting with their own reflections in the wall.

A wife enters her family into a contest to live in an aquarium for a month, behind the glass, for all to see. She thinks it will be fun, that it will liven up her marriage, her home life. Of course, it does something entirely different. Jay Mckenzie’s commentary on vanity and the human need to be seen is poignant, memorable and very entertaining. Well done, Jay Mckenzie!

Honorable Mention

The Spear Sisters for Case #87-45901

Just don’t say my name. Please.

The Spear Sisters interpreted the Challenge prompt to the extreme in both form and content. Case #87-45901 is written as one long dialogue, a complex task. But this dialogue? It’s actually a recording. And the aquarium? It’s a glass box, no, it’s a plastic box. And who’s inside of this box? Who’s watching? There’s a lot to this story but the premise is as old as time- humans wanting and doing whatever they can to get what they can’t have. Or can they? Well done, Spear Sisters!

To read the winners and 10 runners up, click HERE.

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  • Alex H Mittelman 2 months ago

    Yay

  • Arcadius Thompson2 months ago

    Congratulations to the winner.

  • Jess Lee2 months ago

    Congrats to all the winners of the challenge, and a huge shoutout to all who participated and wrote amazing stories!

  • Congratulations to winners. But vocal team should also create a challenge or competition for non vocal+ members.

  • Robby Tal2 months ago

    Congratulations to all of the Challenge winners! Great work :)

  • Laura Pruett2 months ago

    Good job everyone! I enjoyed the prompt, and it’s fun to see the different ways it was interpreted. Congrats to all the winners!

  • It was a fun challenge! Thank you to the vocal team and a big congratulations to those who won and were mentioned! :)

  • C. Stachow2 months ago

    Congratulations to all of the winners! & thank you Vocal team! <3

  • Niklas2 months ago

    Aquarium hmm

  • Savannah Sveta2 months ago

    Congratulations to all the winners!! These are some amazing stories!

  • Harmony Kent2 months ago

    Huge congratulations to every who entered and all the winners, honourable mentions, and runners up! Great stories 💕🙂

  • Madoka Mori2 months ago

    Very happy to see the Spear Sisters get an honourable mention! I thought their story was terrific. The winning story is wonderful as well! A great premise brilliantly executed; it was both funny and charming as all hell.

  • Andrea Lawrence2 months ago

    I definitely have different tastes than the Vocal.Media judges. I've only read one story from the list so far, but I honestly don't get how it was better than some of the other stories. There were noticeable problems throughout, and I didn't find it as engaging as the judges said. I honestly wonder if they just pick things randomly sometimes. Congrats to the winners! I wish I knew or understood your secret sauce.

  • Sara Jane Triglia 2 months ago

    Congrats to the winner. I appreciate this article and would love to see you elaborate on why these were chosen. Since you read each one carefully, I would love some feedback in the form of a comment on my story. I’d like to know what to improve for next time and why it ultimately wasn’t chosen. Big thanks! https://vocal.media/fiction/jumping-caspian

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