Young Black and Free
My gratitude for Juneteenth
Young Black and Free. These are the words that best describe me and the best way to be.
Young Black and Free. This means I rise up from the mud knowing I’m a descendant of royal blood.
Young Black and Free. I’m thankful for the struggle because I wouldn’t be me without it. I will never doubt it.
Young Black and Free. June 19th is the greatest gift my home could give to me, the gift of liberty.
Young Black and Free. To the Lord up in Heaven I rejoice in a world where I can make my own choice.
Young Black and Free. That means I don’t have to be in hell again. There is no sin in my melanin.
Young Black and Free. Little Black boys and girls stand strong on your homeland strong.
Young Black and Free. I hope every young Black child can look in the mirror and see the beauty in a young Black me.
~~Dedicated to my ancestors who didn’t make it to Juneteenth.
About the Creator
Joe Patterson
Hi I'm Joe Patterson. I am a writer at heart who is a big geek for film, music, and literature, which have all inspired me to be a writer. I rap, write stories both short and long, and I'm also aspiring to be an author and a filmmaker.
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Comments (16)
Amazing ❤️
Amen brother, Amen. For the truth shall set us free.
Hi, Great Job! I am a new comer. Be inspired, Keep writing. Gloria.
I feel you
One must always remember their history and try not to repeat it.
Thank you for sharing this incredible piece of poetry that celebrates the essence of being young, Black, and free.👏🙌 Congrats on Top story💕🥰
Joe- I was cheering you on, couplet after couplet. I especially liked 'There is no sin in my melanin." And then you chose to honor those that could not rejoice in this day of remembrance. And I sobered right up. Well-done!
The repetition you use is spot on for this!! Nicely done. ❤️
Excellent! Thank you! Congratulations on the Top Story!
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📝Powerful enough for me 🫶🏾💯‼️ Well done and Also Congratulations on your Top Story❤️‼️🎊
BRAVO!!! BRAVO!!!! I love this so much!!! Happy Juneteenth!!! And congrats on Top Story! Something this beautiful and powerful SHOULD BE Top Story!
Very well written, Joe! Congratulations on Top Story!
Happy Juneteenth! Way to recognize and represent!!! 💖
Very nice!
Happy Juneteenth ! Amazing message in this poem.
Nice work!