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YOU
RE:SURGENCE; poems about mental illness
You are the reason I lie awake at night -
eyes wide and heart bursting out of my ribcage.
You are the reason I toss and turn, desperate for relief,
until I give up on temporary peace
and rise to pace and breathe fire out of my lungs,
attempting to filter out the chaos bubbling in my veins.
You are the reason I gasp and cry soon after,
my disbelief and horror fueling every shaky sob
and shocking memory playing on repeat in my head.
You were the reason I lied
to hide the truth from you
so that you might be spared this heartbreak,
for no one should be the sole blame
on a collapsing house of cards.
Yet you never once hesitated
to point your faults at me,
to weaponize them into a noxious gas
that left me paralyzed and helpless,
cut open and alive on a surgeon's table
so that you could scrutinize me further
for imperfections and broken hardware.
You made me believe this was love.
Till the end, I whispered “I love you”
even as every incision bled and bled
and every blood pool became my mess to clean up.
I escaped you, but your words have followed me home.
They haunt every choice I make
and rob me of joy in every accomplishment,
and every night I sleep and pray
that tomorrow you will not speak
those poisonous spells again.
You are the reason why
when I look into the mirror
I see nothing of worth there,
for if I’m not perfect,
no one will ever love me.
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This is the tenth poem in RE: SURGENCE, a poetry collection by Amanda Starks that shares what it's like to have and fight against mental illness in a free-form, lyrical prose.
Be aware that topics and themes may include suicide, self-harm, and isolation.
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Amanda Starks
Lover of the dark, fantastical, and heart-wrenching. Fantasy writer, poet, and hopefully soon-to-be novelist who wants to create safe spaces to talk about mental health. Subscribe to my free newsletter at www.amandastarks.com for updates!
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Truly, this is heartbreak at its worst. Just in the end, don't hate yourself for other's faults 😊