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You Watch the Eclipse, and I'll Feel it.

Astronomical event seen by the masses, and felt by astrologers. An acrostic poem about the eclipse...

By Olivia MacbethPublished 2 months ago 1 min read

Egoic souls wandering lifeless through space

Calcifying day by day,

Lacerating dead limbs that turned to stone.

Immersing every cell into their subconscious

Plutonic mutations rumbling beneath the surface.

Silence gasps, the mind’s eye exhales

Extrinsic metamorphosis, the ego is freed.


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Olivia Macbeth

one swoop the wind picked up everything in it's path. the little worms that creep from the soil after it rains, the stranger who kicks their feet with childlike innocence. the quirky, horrific, intoxicating moments of life dance in my mind

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 months ago

    Oh wow, this was so dark, deep and intense! Loved your Acrostic!

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