You Don't See Me
But I see you
You don’t see me,
But I see you.
I’ve been wondering what it would be like
If you noticed me,
To hold your hand
To touch you
And to have you touch me.
*
I hear you
But you don’t hear me.
I enjoy your playful banter with friends.
I’ve been wondering what it would be like
To talk with you
And have you talk with me.
*
I know you
But you don’t know me.
When you laugh, your face gets red.
When you concentrate, you squint your eyes.
Your favorite ice cream is rocky road.
You drink your coffee black.
I’ve been wondering what it would be like
If you knew about me too.
*
I love you
The first time I saw you, you stole my heart.
But you don’t love me back.
I’ve been wondering what it would be like
To be together,
Sharing our thoughts and our bodies.
I will never know,
Because you don’t see me.
About the Creator
Julie Lacksonen
Julie has been a music teacher at a public school in Arizona since 1987. She enjoys writing, reading, walking, swimming, and spending time with family.
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