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Yamaha

The Man with a Tomahawk

By Rick Henry Christopher Published about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read
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There once was a man named Yamaha

He owned a real sharp tomahawk

And where he threw it

He aimed for the hit

And ended the plot with stewed chihuahua

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Rick Henry Christopher

Writing is a distraction to fulfill my need for intellectual stimulus, emotional release, and soothing the bruises of the day.

The shattered pieces of life will not discourage me.

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  • Jay Kantor5 months ago

    Sorry Rick ~ Just Trying to be Nice ~

  • Mariann Carrollabout a year ago

    What a funny ending , enjoyed the poem 😆

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Poor Chihauhau? 😅🥹 lol, good one!

  • Kelli Sheckler-Amsdenabout a year ago

    Oh my goodness!

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Oh snap! That took a turn fast, lol.

  • Loryne Andaweyabout a year ago

    Oh, poor doggo! (Then again, I should talk 😅)

  • Lol, poor chihuahua! Loved your limerick, Rick! See what I did there, lol!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    oh dear. Poor puppy. Well done.

  • Quincy.Vabout a year ago

    I found the unexpected ending of the limerick both humorous and slightly disturbing at the same time!

  • Stephanie J. Bradberryabout a year ago

    This is definitely absurd to the max!

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