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Wrong Side Of The Protest

Are you with us…

By Alexis Dean Jr.Published 2 months ago 1 min read
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“Look Ma,” she pointed…

“Blue suits, big guns, vests, and strong!

Are they here to help?”

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About the Creator

Alexis Dean Jr.

Alexis “L.E.X Dean Jr. is a clean Hip-Hop artist, poet, and educator from Milwaukee, WI. As a writer and music artist, he focuses on the importance of educating through his words and stories...

IG: @DreamsStartYoung

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  • Rae Solace25 days ago

    This piece ought to have won the blue haiku contest. Pity that the judges prefer writing that is light and easily digestible over writing that is poignant and momentous.

  • Kay Husnickabout a month ago

    Even your tags are spot-on because this really is heartbreaking.

  • Jollyoddbodabout a month ago

    Congratulations on creating such a powerful and thought provoking haiku piece - absolutely brilliant. Thank you for sharing.

  • Vi Nguyen2 months ago

    You've taken the simple power of haiku to new heights. Such an arresting image that leaves a lingering thought... that is the question of our times indeed. So powerful!

  • Andrei Z.2 months ago

    It makes one wonder: what happened here? And what is going to happen next? It evoked all sorts of images in my head, desperate ones. Strong!

  • SC Wells2 months ago

    Absolutely brilliant. Really hits hard.

  • Nani2 months ago

    This was really good.

  • Gabriel Huizenga2 months ago

    This is so powerful, thank you for sharing it <3

  • So much power in 17 syllables, amazing job! :)

  • Sam Desir-Spinelli2 months ago

    Best blue haiku I’ve read so far. Lots of weight and impact in only a few words

  • Kim2 months ago

    Wow

  • Wilson Fisk2 months ago

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  • Kendall Defoe2 months ago

    Sad and true...

  • i LOVED this.

  • Aza Y Alam2 months ago

    A refreshing change from nature praising haiku!

  • Cathy holmes2 months ago

    Powerful piece. Well done

  • Tiffany Gordon 2 months ago

    Brilliant!!!!

  • C. H. Richard2 months ago

    Hearted and subscribed.

  • C. H. Richard2 months ago

    Wow! Excellent! So much said in 3 lines!

  • Gina B.2 months ago

    Incredibly powerful use of dialogue in the haiku format. Can't wait to read more of your work.

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