I yearn to express the depth of my solitude
yet every verse I craft becomes an amorous missive
addressed to you. To the heavens. To the core of mysterious substance
and the echoes of celestial beacons
amidst the obscurity of the cosmos.
Each poem I pen is
a missive to my sorrow. The demise of my uncles,
my aunt, my sister, and faltered conclusions
and botched commencements.
Like the instance when the woman I adored
wedded another man. I lingered, traversing the labyrinth
of a raven's raucous 3 am insanity,
for countless years — abandoning existence for hope.
Yet, I still yearn for her,
I still behold her emerald gaze beneath the stars,
enumerating fireflies as if they were reminiscences
of our existence in an alternate universe.
I long to convey the sense of belonging
within this realm, but honestly, I perceive myself
afflicted by a pestilence, not of the flesh but of
cognition and spirit.
A plague of idealism, not of sagacity
but of illumination.
I yearn to disclose my happiness
yet then I would be devoid of words to
guide you away from this
fractured desolate realm,
the path into my heart,
a specter-ridden town of my distant past
where dreams have weathered away.
About the Creator
Naveedkk
Every written or spoken word is not necessarily according to the standards of the reader and listener. The speaker is in his own state while the listener is in his own state.
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Comments (10)
This was so amazing! Beautiful choice of words!
This was a very thought provoking and emotionally evoking poem, Naveedkk. I loved your vocabulary and turn of phrase, it created a very melancholic narrative but was still appetizing to the reader. It had such nice flow and rhyme to the over piece! Great work!
Splendid outcome!
Great job and I loved it
Beautiful I ❤ it..
Your writing is exquisite.
I must say Naveedkk that this was an exceptionally well written piece
Outstanding. I liked it a lot and couldn't find any flaws.
This is beautifully sad Navee. Nostalgia, longing and lovely prose.
This is truly beautiful 🥰✨