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Words so Smooth

Would I

By Antoinette L BreyPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
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Words so Smooth
Photo by Marvin Meyer on Unsplash

I listen to his words

I'm starting to be convinced

I look at the grand ring

It appears to sing- warning, warning

And yet as I am listening

Staring into his eyes

I am spellbound

And then to break the spell

His friend saunders over

Laughing about his last nights fling

I freeze

All those words that had moved me

lies, lies

All of them had been lies

heartbreak
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About the Creator

Antoinette L Brey

I am an elder in a time of freedom. I am now retired. All i want to do is have fun. Without a daily routine, my imagination is one of my only salvations. I am not planning on writing a book, it is just for my own pleasure

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  • Sarah Danaher6 months ago

    Oh how smooth words can be and yet so untruthful, good job

  • Babs Iverson6 months ago

    Exquisitely written!!!! Run, run!!! Love ir!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Tiffany Gordon 6 months ago

    Fantastic!!!

  • Dana Crandell6 months ago

    Ouch! Very well written!

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